Reviews for Love's Battle
Runecutter chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Quite convincing in its ideas, yet a little bit thin in the execution... where is the whole background for this development, where's the true extent of the drama? So much potential and you end up with this short piece that comes around a bit anemic. A pity.
lex chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
this is a decent story, and i think it would have been a good one if you hadnt made it a one-shot. i think you should keep writing, your writing still is a little bit rough now, but you have a natural talent that is sure to develope. hope to see more of your work, and i would encourage others to read this story and give you more opinions.