|Reviews for Dillon Penelope what|
| Barry I. Grauman chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
This is a good story, 'atomicbetty'...but as I was reading the "climax" (so to speak), I couldn't help being reminded of a similar incident between Betty and Noah in "Lifted Burdens"...you are very enthusiastic in your writing, but your spelling needs a bit more attention. Just remember, it's "DYLAN"...and "NOAH". You definitely
had fun typing this, I see...I look forward to reading more from you. By the way, in "betty quits and finds her true love", wouldn't Noah need basic training before he could become a full-fledged Galactic Guardian? He'd certainly have to spend some time at the Galactic Academy in order to prepare himself for such a responsible position.
Other than that...thanks. :)
| MikariStar chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
Good story, you've been writing a lot that's good :)