Reviews for Lemon Drops
harley chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Really excellent story. good job.
PhantomPenguin chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
This was...stunning. The emotions in this were amazingly realistic, and unimaginably sad. It's been nearly four years since I first read HBP, but this quickly brought back all of the thoughts and emotions I had after reading it that first time. I think the lemon drops at the end were an excellent, if tragic, touch.

Beautifully done. I loved it.
Iwas13whenIwrotethese chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
No, not the lemon drops! I still cannot believe that Albus died, I reread that part of the book a million times before I could belive it! That was a great fic.
Maleficent Angel chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
Realistic and emotional... how wonderful.

You do have an extraordinary talent for these fics.

The lemon drops were a marvellous idea - it is so often the mundane that reminds us most of those we have loved and lost.
BansheeGirl chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
Oh, so wonderfully written! Very realistic, it seems you captured J.K.’s McGonagall very well indeed. Was not the death of our dearest Dumbledore so heartbreaking? I was quite disappointed that we did not see more of Minerva McGonagall’s reactions to the disastrous event, but alas… that’s where good old fanfiction steps in!

Web Writer Witch chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Aw, how sad! But well written, especially the ending. Of course, I could be biased because you're my best friend...
Alesia G chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Again excellent! Excellently written Minerva. Its funny hope Albus manages to always be there when she needs him whether she knows it or not.
JoeBob1379 chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
I sobbed my eyes out through all of chapter 29... but when the funeral came I didn't cry at all...

Anyway, I think you've characterized her perfectly. This story seemed to capture McGonagall's reaction exactly how I imagined it- especially the part about the Lemon Drops... *sigh* I miss him already... although I kinda feel the same way Harry does... When Sirius died, I couldn't believe it... but this time, I kind of expected it, so it wasn't such a shock... but I still sobbed my eyes out...
SherbetKitty chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
So beautiful! But so sad... It made me cry *sob*. Poor Minerva. Good work!
Leta McGotor chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
That was very sad, indeed. The end with the lemon drops. It is strange that you really can't cry seeing the funeral and all but little things like the lemon drops. I have experienced that by myself. Well, very well written.
Quill of Minerva chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
Well here I go again...the tears are falling!

I am still holding out for the revelation that Albus didnt die but it was Aberforth
geeklovegirl chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
This is an amazing story. You can really feel the emotions coming out of this one.
Joelpup62 chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
This is like the 8th time I've cried today...your fic really is's a very relieving thing to do...I actually feel like terrible inside about this though...I need to have a really good cry again...
Palanfanaiel chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
Loved it... Still as sad as it is in the book... Good pov from Min )

chibi chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
I can't believe they are really separated...argh! this is nice n subtly done...pls write more!
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