Reviews for Raine, Raine, Go Away...
Maloire chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
I never quite thought of it to be a trade off: raine for adel, that's quite an insite! the rest of the story was woven neatly, but here are a few things you may want to check...

Laguna cried out, running back towards the town of [Winhil].

~"Winhill"

Trails of Galbadia [corpse] made a trail to the center of the city, gun

~corpses?
TripleC Squared chapter 1 . 2/25/2002
*Snifs* WAAAAAAAAAAAAA! That was Sad! I haven't quite finished the game yet, But I do know most of what happens, so this story makes sence and makes me cry...*Runs off to find tissue* Bye, Blitz, See you around.
Sabaye Leyr chapter 1 . 4/11/2001
::sniffle:: Oh my god...that is so sad...
lemondoodle chapter 1 . 4/11/2001
I liked this. Poor Laguna. *sniff* You write very well...um..the only thing really missing is well...Squall. You would think after the flower shop owner told Laguna Raine gave birth he would wonder what happened to the baby...and not just what happened to Ellone. But other than that this is good. :D