|Reviews for Come Undone|
| makura moderski chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
wow i'm glad to see someone shares my love for hinasaku!
| AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
..that was lovely...and beautiful...I just loved how they were afraid and happy and lost and confused and content.
...how they were happy...
| Sayaka-sama chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
I swear. Nobody does HinaSaku. N-O-B-O-D-Y.
Thanks a million for filling the HinaSaku void in my life. This was just beautiful.
Which reminds me, I've got an idea for a HinaSaku fic... There are desperate other HinaSaku fans in need!
| Set-chan chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
T-that was one of the beautiful piece of writing I have ever read...*nods*...very well done...
...m...do you think you could ever do a TentenxHinata fic?...I believe that you're an amazing author and can make a great story on those two...
| psycho-chromatic chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
There's so much I want to say... But all I can is: Simply Beautiful.
| Riona 11 chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
i still don't know how they got killed.. but i can surely say that if they really love each other all the people around them don't matter! i mean it's not their life so they can't judge the two! hehe! anyways, i loved reading it! _
| von seckendorf chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Captivating and inspiring.
To say more will only cheapen the moment.
| Raidin chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
Wow this story is written dam good i loved every sentence. not to often i see such a fic written so well everytthing flows smooth and you depth and description is deep. again very well done far better than anything i've done on or offline. keep it up
| Don't Phunk With Me chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
that was amazing, beautiful and cunning. I liked it, especially the part of dancing in diamond shoes. I love your work, you and Genialhinata are my favorites
| bandwitch chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
This fic is beautiful. The words just seem to entwine and flow together and make a big colorful picture. Great job.
| Jangalain chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
I loved this one just as much as Kaleidoscope. Both are beautifully written, the imagery is simply amazing. But I do have to ask, who was nararating Kaleidoscope?
Keep writing, you're wonderful at it.
| Mistress of the Sand chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
...That was beautiful! Wow! I have never seen that pairing EVER before, but you made it wonderful. You are a wonderful writer, and you have my complete respect.
| Details chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
All of your stories are just incredible.
HinataxSakura has become one of my favorite pairings.
:] Please continue to write.
| toomanypickles chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Brr. I love the writing style and the imagery in this story. It gives me the shivers.
| Fantastical Queen Ebony Black chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
very pretty. its hard to find good shoujo ai in the Naruto fandom, and htis pairing is hard to believe for some, but you did it well. pretty...