Reviews for Come Undone
makura akuhei chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
wow i'm glad to see someone shares my love for hinasaku!
AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
..that was lovely...and beautiful...I just loved how they were afraid and happy and lost and confused and content. they were happy...
Sayaka-sama chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
I swear. Nobody does HinaSaku. N-O-B-O-D-Y.

Thanks a million for filling the HinaSaku void in my life. This was just beautiful.

Which reminds me, I've got an idea for a HinaSaku fic... There are desperate other HinaSaku fans in need!

Thanks again.

Set-chan chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
T-that was one of the beautiful piece of writing I have ever read...*nods*...very well done... you think you could ever do a TentenxHinata fic?...I believe that you're an amazing author and can make a great story on those two...
psycho-chromatic chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
There's so much I want to say... But all I can is: Simply Beautiful.
Riona 11 chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
i still don't know how they got killed.. but i can surely say that if they really love each other all the people around them don't matter! i mean it's not their life so they can't judge the two! hehe! anyways, i loved reading it! _
von seckendorf chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Captivating and inspiring.

To say more will only cheapen the moment.

*bows deeply*
Raidin chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
Wow this story is written dam good i loved every sentence. not to often i see such a fic written so well everytthing flows smooth and you depth and description is deep. again very well done far better than anything i've done on or offline. keep it up
Don't Phunk With Me chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
that was amazing, beautiful and cunning. I liked it, especially the part of dancing in diamond shoes. I love your work, you and Genialhinata are my favorites
bandwitch chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
This fic is beautiful. The words just seem to entwine and flow together and make a big colorful picture. Great job.
Jangalain chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
I loved this one just as much as Kaleidoscope. Both are beautifully written, the imagery is simply amazing. But I do have to ask, who was nararating Kaleidoscope?

Keep writing, you're wonderful at it.
Mistress of the Sand chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
...That was beautiful! Wow! I have never seen that pairing EVER before, but you made it wonderful. You are a wonderful writer, and you have my complete respect.
Details chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
All of your stories are just incredible.

HinataxSakura has become one of my favorite pairings.

:] Please continue to write.
toomanypickles chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Brr. I love the writing style and the imagery in this story. It gives me the shivers.
Fantastical Queen Ebony Black chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
very pretty. its hard to find good shoujo ai in the Naruto fandom, and htis pairing is hard to believe for some, but you did it well. pretty...
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