|Reviews for Tsubame's Turning|
| midnightblue123 chapter 11 . 11/11/2007
FINALLY! someone else other then the older guys get the spotlight! Great fic!
| Adelaide MacGregor chapter 11 . 12/11/2006
I liked it! Great job and well written. Although I hate Tomoe, I can see your view point, but still believe Kaoru is a better match with him. Like the mention of the lady vampire who used to be a Doctor by Sano at the beginning. Megumi I presume? Great ending. Simple but cute. Good luck!
| the sacred night chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
At first, I was really indignant for Katsu. When I saw that he'd been tricked as well, I was somewhat mollified, but I'm still leery of "it was too late to stop." I'm extremely curious about what he'll do now that he's changed her. She clearly would rather die than be a vamp, that much was obvious. He's not thinking clearly, I guess, because who would be? I also sincerely hope this "Meg" person who drugged her isn't Megumi, although Megumi's connections with drugs cannot be denied. Megumi never got involved with drugs of her own free will, and she's really not a bad person at all, so I hope you haven't made her one in this story.
| lolo popoki chapter 11 . 9/4/2005
It's finished! Cute ending, if a bit abrupt... I really wasn't expecting marriage at all :) Very well-written and original storyline; I really enjoyed reading this! And I like the fact that Kenshin was still with Tomoe in this :) I liked Battousai's character in this story... you portrayed him very nicely. Good luck on any future writing!
| Nekotsuki chapter 11 . 9/3/2005
Your story is original, and when it comes to disgusting revelations, I've seen far worse. It did tend to end abruptly but that doesn't stop it from being a well thought out and Original! piece of vampire fic. Feel free to keep experimenting!
...and I should get around to replying to that letter...heh. Take care!
| Zoleth chapter 10 . 8/25/2005
Nice. There are many vampire stories that can be considered really original. This one can. I like it.
| lolo popoki chapter 10 . 8/21/2005
I see that Tsubame's starting to come to some kind of realization about what exactly constitutes a "monster"... I liked the interaction between her and Yahiko... so cute :) And Kenshin's married? Hmm... now that's interesting. Kaoru or Tomoe? Someone else entirely? And are they a vampire too?
| XKenKao12X chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
Arent u the person that drew the vampire rk fan manga?
| Nekotsuki chapter 10 . 8/20/2005
Hee, was that the 'disgusting' revelation? It's not so bad. It's still good, and this little scene between Tsubame and Yahiko is very cute (er, in a vampire-y sort of way...
| lolo popoki chapter 9 . 8/15/2005
Oh eeww... ;P Bathing in blood? (*shudders*) Very interesting chapter though :) Even though poor Tsubame was the one that did it, I think that woman definitely needed to be taken out...
A couple things... one, when Yahiko is telling Kenshin about the circuit breaker, you missed a quotation mark; and two, you have it set so you can't recieve anonymous reviewers :) That might be a reason why some people don't review.
| lolo popoki chapter 8 . 8/7/2005
Ack! Sorry it took me couple days to get around to reviewing this chapter!
It's Battousai! Glad to see him make an appearance! And it's cute to see Tsubame's thoughts on Yahiko... she seems to be developing feelings for him also :) I can't wait to see how things go in the next chapter!
| Nekotsuki chapter 7 . 7/30/2005
This chapter was particularly nice. You say the story might be cursed, but remember that persephonesfolly is an unknown name on and people are less likely to peer at it. Have faith in your very nifty writing skills! So please don't fret, and continue posting this story. I like it a great deal. (For the record, when TJ got up to chapter seven, I only had eleven reviews. ;;)
| lolo popoki chapter 7 . 7/30/2005
Hmm... things are really getting interesting! I wonder what that guy is up to...? Tsubame's turning out to have some useful talents, and it's so cute the way Yahiko acts around her :) Can't wait to see what happens next!
| lolo popoki chapter 6 . 7/26/2005
Aww... Yahiko the embarassed vampire :) Poor Tsubame's been out of touch with modern society for so long; it must be quite an adjustment for her. I can't wait to see how she ends up interacting with Sano in the next chapter! After the knife attack that is :)
| lolo popoki chapter 5 . 7/25/2005
I'm glad to see Yahiko recovered, and that Tsubame's finally starting to listen more :) It's really a shame that Katsu had died though... Well, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!