Reviews for Love of the Most Exquisite Kind
Senna Wales chapter 2 . 7/22/2005
You do realize that this is just a chatscript format, minus all of the colons, plus the quotation marks? :D For some reason, the sight of all of the "..." made me smile. It looks so absurd in conversation.

How interesting. Tres, tres. Another morbid romance story. I sort of knew that she was probably dying.. but the last line still surprised me. Mostly because you don't expect that from Erik, you know? :) I just loved how ambiguous it was till the very, very end. Then you have to go back and reread it and it's all even better the second time. :)

You know what you should do? You should turn this into one of those epic-length romance novels, AEOT style. 60 chapters of Scorpion fluff! Then publish it as a romance novel. "Full of eye-opening smut! Tales of passion and romance! Guaranteed to blow your mind away!" :D
Senna Wales chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
HAH HAH HAH!

You know what, Scorpion? I've read so many horrific Morbidity Contest stories, and so many of YOUR stories, that when I read the last line, you know what I did? Did I shiver and scream in fear and disgust? No! I laughed! I laughed! Look what you've done, sponsoring so many desensitizing stories! :P :D

You've finally done it. You've finally started a story up under the category of romance. ROMANCE! And you've even DARED to not label it as HORROR too! Pure fluffy romance, eh? Hah hah hah. That'll make all the Sue authors scratch their heads. "Romance? Buh... but.. I... no.." :D I absolutely loved your summary. Scorpion style, indeed! This is so classically Scorpion. So.. smutty. And bloody. Woo! That rhymed! :)

Okay, okay. I'm REALLY babbling this time. I liked this chapter. So.. gory. Hah. Classic. That's all I can say. Classic. I loved the command, "Sit." Erik treats her like an animal, you realize that? But it's beautiful all the same. The bleeding. Right.

This is going to be a fun bunch of vignettes to keep me company throught the rest of the year. And throughout next year. And the year after that. After all, my darling, you NEVER update more than once every couple of weeks, eh? You like to draw things out. So yay. Hah. :D
The Maiden Amorisa chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
Christine: lalalala *o* my baby doesnt blink, cry or move

Erik: um christine?

Christine: baby baby baby *o*

Erik: CHRISTINE

Christine: *o*

Erik: THE BABY IS FUCKING DEAD YOU MORON

you know I love you :kicks cheek:

now how about you write real fluff where nobody dies, is born dead or gets hurt, if oyu do, I'll give you $20
Quiet2885 chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
This is the most twisted fluff I've ever seen. Nice!

The first story made me a bit ill with the well written descriptions of the blood going into the mouth, due much in part to a real life experience I won't elaborate on. Still very well told, though!

The second was probably my favorite, as you made such a morbid event seem so sensual and beautiful. I love the dialogue in it, Christine's naivety and Erik's twisted form of love. Beautifully written!

The third I liked because it wasn't based on strange morbidity, but rather a sad and very real event in life. Their pain and Christin'e insanity could be anyone's reaction to such a loss. At the same time, it was still nicely twisted in the proper E/C fashion. Comparing Erik's face to that of the dead child was very creative!

Great job! Looking forward to more!
phantomy-cookies chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
Oh gosh. Has Senna been influencing you, my lady Scorpion? I suppose it was only a matter of time before you gave in to the inevitable urge to harm a small baby. Elanie was only the beginning, wasn't she? WASN'T SHE! Pretty soon you're going to start butchering them when they're tiny little zygotes.

"Erik! Erik! Leave them alone! Please!" LOLOL.

There! Free inspiration, compliments of the phantomy-cookies. Think of it... the next chapter could feature Erik's poisonous sperm and how horriby it mutilates Christine and her little eggs. Or something like that. Haha. Should I stop reviewing this before I scare your readers off? (Not that I think your readers aren't already somewhat desensitized to your hideous brand of Scorpion!Smut. HEEHEE.)

Love this. Love YOU. *mwah*
Gondolier chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
Oh wow, my heart is aching after reading that one. I could see it coming, and it was just so hard to read through. I'll try not to spoil for others, but, Scorpion, that was just beautiful. I'm loving this series
wantingbroadway chapter 2 . 7/21/2005
Dark yet sensual. I love it! Keep them coming! They are really amazing! Update Soon!
phantomy-cookies chapter 2 . 7/18/2005
I don't get it. Why is Erik killing her? Did Christine do something bad? What's going on? They're just speaking to each other. And why does it all sound so pornographic? This doesn't make any sense.

What's more, how can Christine still be alive when she supposedly DIED in the last chapter? Did you or did you not say "She breathed no more." So how is she breathing now? What did I miss? Did Erik bring her back to life so that he could KILL her again? This story is as nonsensical as it is terrible.

I love you, Scorpion! Give me MORE!

MORE! MORE! MORE!
phantomy-cookies chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
"Pfft. This isn't love. This is just smut! Your kisses, your blood, it's all just smut... and smut of the most DESPICABLE kind, the kind that people do not even admit to themselves! The kind that gives you a thrill, when you think of it...

"Just imagine: Christine kissing Erik as she chokes on her own blood!"

And she laughed scornfully.

"But do you love me, Scorpion? If Erik were handsome, would you love me?"

*glares*
Gondolier chapter 2 . 7/18/2005
Wow, Scorpion. I love the idea of doing a series of POTO vignettes. The first two are incredible-the punjab lasso tie-in is wonderful. So powerful! *hugs punjab lasso* And just straight dialogue-very creative. I look forward to reading more!
D. R. Auchula chapter 2 . 7/17/2005
Absolutely brilliant!

Such beautiful tragedy and morbidity is why I adore the Erik/Christine pairing, and you write it exquisitely!
Blonde Charger chapter 2 . 7/17/2005
Inspirational, admittedly morbid, but beautiful and enthralling. You have a gift.
Redrose chapter 2 . 7/17/2005
Hi Scorpion,

I was so excited to see something new from you!

I suppose all of these will be 300 word drabbles?

They're wonderful, as always, dark, morbid and romantic

in only the way Erik and Christine can understand.

Look forward to more,

Redrose
RipperBlackstaff chapter 2 . 7/17/2005
morbid but romantic, as always, I loved it !
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