|Reviews for Bearer of the Skull, Servant of the Darkness|
| FoxFlyer chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
Poor little mutt, joining the ranks of the pathetic and insane.
Vixie: Be easy on him. He'll be ok, he's tough.
*pouts* He ought to be allowed to be with Harry.
| Inkfire chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
This was amazing
| Steff chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
Loved it! You have a great writing style. Are you going to write more of this?
| MrsPiccolosWife chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
That was amazing! I could picture this who scene in my mind. I felt such hate for Voldemort. You are a great author who connects with the reader!
| shadow chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
please update soon .. thanx bye x
| mj chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
not bad..not great
| sportschickVLVR chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
You read HBP already too? Most people are stretching it out for over the summer... bah! I read it in one straight shot as soon as I got it. 14 hours baby! This is really great. You're right though... if someone hasn't read HBP it would totally ruin it for them. But that's the way I like it! It's for insiders... _ This is so great. You are a really good author! So descriptive, and you really capture how Draco felt about serving Voldemort. Wonderful fic!
| The-x-Mad-x-Hatress chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
Wow The book came out 2 days ago and you already wrote a fic that fit into the plot!
I loved it!
| SakuraSyaoran4eva chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
I think this is a very good piece of work, but there were things that struck me as unusual:
"It had used Horcruxes to immortalise itself, I knew it had!" Draxo does not know what Horcruxes are. It's impossible for him to know as it would not be in any book, he could not have learned it from anyone b/c no one would tell him (Hermionie herself had no clue).
Throughout the scene, Draco seems indifferent somewhat to what's happening. That's odd b/c Draco is a very mixed up charismatic induvisual who never bothers to hide his feelings for anything.
"He is a master of puppets, the one who controls us as though we are mere marionettes" Voldemort has managed to convince each and every death eater that he is important, that is why they follow him. Draco is smart enough to figure out the truth yet he is also egotistical enough to believe he is special. Draco would never give in without a fight. Here he just excepts the task ahead. There is no true feeling from him.
He also seems a bit house-elvish through out the piece. You are a very good writer and have talent, you need to develop youre characters a bit more and give them personality.
I hope you take my critism as help.