|Reviews for Anything But Mine|
| dracosnumber1girl chapter 20 . 6/21/2009
This was...interesting to say the least. The writing was awesome, the plot just wasn't one of my favs. :shrug: Like I said, great writing, just a not so great plot.
| siriusblackaddict chapter 15 . 5/31/2009
no bad cliffhaner this time? i love the cliffhangers!
| siriusblackaddict chapter 9 . 5/31/2009
this is really good, but i just cant stand the way the grammar is pread out like were all three years old and dont get it... still, really great plot and all! nice work
| loveofwrittenword chapter 15 . 5/29/2009
What a great chapter! I was laughing so hard I cried, especially when she messed all over him and he kicked her across the room. I know that should be funny, but what can I say she deserved what was coming to her. Great story so far; I have enjoyed ever chapter! :D
| Electryone chapter 8 . 5/24/2009
I think that the premise is good here and I liked the idea of having Sirius walk her down the aisle while he was in love with her.
However, there are quite a few problems with this story, mainly with characterization. Hermione is way too accepting of Ron's bad behavior. And Ron is just plain horrible-this story would be much better if he was more of a complex character instead of having no good qualities at all.
Overall, the situation is a bit unrealistic. I can't imagine that Ron and Hermione would only kiss once before he decided to propose to her. And I can't believe the two of them have never discussed physical intimacy before.
I also can't imagine that Sirius would give her no clue about his feelings.
Other than these three, I do like the secondary characters (Remus, Tonks, Ginny, Harry etc). And I applaud you for choosing the HG/SB ship, even though I don't agree with your interpretation of these characters.
| What chapter 12 . 4/21/2009
Okay, I realize this story is very old but I just needed to say this. I have been recommended this fic several times and while I have been enjoying it somewhat, I am so fkcuking pissed off at how OOC Hermione is. It's fuckcking bullshhitt! She would never be as fuckkckcing weak as you write her- or as much of a sap.
| Jasmina chapter 20 . 4/19/2009
Oh my goodness! I love it! I'm still trying to recover from this emotional roller coaster. This is one hell of a fanfiction, and I don't usually read Hermione/Sirius fics. So you know, I pretty much bawled my eyes out and smeared my mascara down to my lips!(P.S. I rarely ever get this emotional, let alone cry.)
| GIN chapter 20 . 3/25/2009
love the story
| BluDust chapter 20 . 2/11/2009
| MoonlitRendezvous chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
I just wanted to say how much I love this story. Seriously, I've re-read it so many times and it always makes me feel all bubblely and girly inside. LOL
| Laurenmk20 chapter 20 . 1/15/2009
LMAO HAHAH I almost wished that she would have found out it was Sirius lol, but then again I guess it wouldn't be as funny lol. Haha. Love the ending.
| Laurenmk20 chapter 18 . 1/15/2009
Wait how does she know that or was it because he was naked? I'm a bit confused lol
| Pleiades81 chapter 20 . 8/26/2008
That was probably the most beautiful story that I've read yet. It really touched me. Thank you...please write another SB/HG fic soon!
| AuroraLamia chapter 20 . 8/17/2008
aww what a beautiful story _
| AmySnape chapter 20 . 5/12/2008
I just read the entire story this morning and it has to be my favourite Sirius/Hermione fic! It was excellent!