Reviews for A Keen Observer
strawberryella chapter 31 . 11/18/2021
I know you probably don’t follow your reviews on this story anymore but I just wanted to say that I absolutely love it. I read it first over a decade ago and just reread it for the first time. Thank you xxx
Yehuda Dream chapter 6 . 7/16/2021
Great work!
CocoaPuff1347 chapter 1 . 7/3/2021
Wow. I’ve never read this ship and to say that I liked this fanfic would be an understatement.

The way that Andromeda, Bellatrix, and Narcissa’s childhoods were described built a world throughout the fic and made the characters more 3 dimensional.

I loved it
DarkChocolateLord chapter 3 . 5/16/2021
I love how we see the political tensions growing even now, and the contrast between the adults talking about war and politics and the kids being kids is perfect. And Ted and the Christmas card! Heck yes.
DarkChocolateLord chapter 2 . 5/16/2021
I love how you write Ted and Bella and Sirius; their personalities as children fit them as adults so well.
DarkChocolateLord chapter 1 . 5/16/2021
I love this. The description of their childhood is so fitting, and how close the sisters are is both adorable and heartbreaking; it'll be interesting to see how they grow apart.
planesinthesky chapter 28 . 5/12/2021
This is my favourite chapter *heart eyes*
planesinthesky chapter 1 . 5/12/2021
I've read it all twice . Black fics are so uncommon and when they are I feel like they're very cliche-ly written, but this was the first Black fic I read and it blew me away. This was SO. BRILLIANT. Bringing in the other sister's and Lestrange and Malfoy? Brilliant. Love this story
Guest chapter 3 . 4/1/2021
I love their dynamic and your characterization. I'm considering this canon. And the Christmas card! This is the third time I've read this and it's better every time.
Wanderlustatheart chapter 22 . 3/3/2021
Going back through the story a second time, I was wondering what was your hypothesis on the fact that Ted and Andromeda only had one child. Was it because Nymphadora was a very intense child?
Wanderlustatheart chapter 31 . 2/27/2021
I know that you’ve written this story a long time ago but I trust that you will see my reviews! I loved this so so much (maybe too much, I’ve been completely anti-social for the past 48h). Thank you so much for this. I also noticed how much your chapters improved the more we got into the story. These characters recently filled my mind and I really wonded about them. This story really offered me the imagination I needed during these boring times and the current snowstorm. Thank you so much 3
Wanderlustatheart chapter 30 . 2/27/2021
Lovely
Wanderlustatheart chapter 29 . 2/27/2021
I love the parts where Andy gets along with Ted’s family.
Wanderlustatheart chapter 27 . 2/27/2021
I LOVED THIS
Wanderlustatheart chapter 26 . 2/27/2021
Awnn I wish you had put more details about how their summer went...
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