Reviews for A Keen Observer |
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![]() ![]() The sad thing is that Bellatrix does kill him in the end. |
![]() ![]() I really love this fanfic... Just a note, to get in to the Ravenclaw common room I thought you have to answer a riddle. Correct me if I'm wrong, please. But otherwise, this story is AMAZING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I reread parts of this story, and it brought tears to my eyes for a second time. Bellatrix and Andromeda's relationship is so beautifully tragic... and the letter Andy wrote at the end touched on all the right notes. I also love the tone throughout ... That almost rose-colored lens rhapsodizing ... The hindsight to know that those were precious and innocent days... That everything was going to fall to pieces, and you can't change it, can't control it... And the comparison between Sirius and Bella felt spot on. So much texture. This was epic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have no words to describe how much I love this. Andromeda is the perfect narrator: her commentary is so mature, and I especially love her (your) portrayal of Bellatrix - how and why she changed. Thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I never really imagined Bellatrix as having a soft side, of sorts, really. I'm in love with this story. |
![]() ![]() GREAT story! Thanks so much! |
![]() ![]() Oh! That was fast. |
![]() ![]() You'd think she'd have been prepared, given how tjingsvwentbfien. |
![]() ![]() Oh. Holy shit. |
![]() ![]() Living dangerously |
![]() ![]() Busted! |
![]() ![]() Uh oh! |
![]() ![]() Performing admirably |
![]() ![]() Wink wink |
![]() ![]() Yay! Fluff! |