I have found this fic recently and I absolutely love it! I finished reading this in the last few days. I'm definitely going to read it again.

I never get tired of reading this masterpiece. I wish I could read it for the first time again! I cannot express how much this story means to me.

Oh thank goodness! I was scared Luke would abandon his Father. The rebellion will always “need” the last Jedi. But Vader has no one else, and will always need Luke more. More importantly Luke wants to be with his father.
I was expecting Lando to not be dead, even in the end. The way you wrote it was so unexpected; his last thoughts felt like he would be fine. Brilliant and devastating way to do it.
Great fic :)

I’m surprised Vader is allowing Leia to call the shots. Instead of trying to capture her and the info or just threatening the rebels. They were playing with Luke’s life here (though I understand why). But of all of them only Vader had the purest and sole concern for Luke. Not politics or the war or other people.
Lando is brilliant! Lol it’s so obvious to him and no one else figured it out.

This time it is definitely not Vaders fault though he is blaming himself. Luke would have been safe in the rebellion for now. But he chose to go into a trap despite knowing it was wrong and people trying to stop him. And he lied about it. Hard to have sympathy. Any pilot could have helped Han there. Not sure Vader could have done more to help.
I’m loving the “medic” and the “pilot”! They are awesome, despite being imps and not having real names, lol.

Oh nooo… Luke is making it near impossible for his Father or anyone to protect him.
He needs Leia’s permission but doesn’t care about Vader’s concerns? And why is the force pushing him to do this?
So many questions! Nice fic :)

Such a great story! I absolutely loved this! Thank you for writing it!

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Wow, this was a fantastic read! You have quite the writing skill, and this story had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. I love the way you wove the different perspectives and storylines together, and whether intentional or happy accident, the way you left people in situations so that you had well-crafted solutions instead of hastily-shoved-in deus ex machina was absolutely delightful. Thank you for sharing this astounding story with us!

I love this!

Agreed fall republic came multiple factors one Over pacifist if way Jedi not take threats of seriously ,overcenterialization of order on one planet ,detachment from self ,detachment from society ,over attachment to politics ignorance of laws and regulations ,unwilling to stomp out corrupt plagued the Republic ,arroganance ,pride and Denile that lead Sith return and destruction of thier order .The arrogance to assume Sith where extinct when as long Sith relics around Galaxy and force user then their always threat of Sith return .

Allaince form out abused ,misused and neglected Planets .Same group most used by Sepratist Dooku inner circle and Sidious .Republic and Jeid that also used by Sidious .
Not Rebels not innocent but no near bad as Empire that enslaved entire planets for profit ,strip mined planets until they become barren toxic wastelands ,Same Empire use same corrupt leader manipulated everyone from beginning .Same Empire that forceful oppressing any standing against corrupt reign of Palpatine psychofants ,bigots and corrupt officers .How many same scum that ruined the Republic are die hard supporter of Palpantine .

Best bet tell Vader so that he come plan hope does not evolve you not breathing

Excelente historia ...me atrapó desde el comienzo y no pude parar de leer hasta terminar...muchas gracias por crear está historia y que no se haya quedado en tu cabeza .

I've read this fix once already and I could not stop reading until I was finished. I absolutely love this. The writing's wonderful, and the characters are deliciously in character. Do I'm reading this again! XD

This first chapter is a really good strong opening, and I love it. You do a great job sucking me into the tension from the get go. And it's just a really good strong opening. I'm on mobile so I'm keeping this short but I'll give the rest of the chapters better reviews when I'm ony PC.

Take care, and happy writing!
Squirrel