|Reviews for To Forge the Future|
| Hungarian Horntail chapter 54 . 1/12/2006
You are cruel! Why did you have to kill McCormick and let Kenny live? Please get rid of Kenny soon!
Apart from that, the story's wonderful, as usual.
| Vague Lenore chapter 54 . 10/4/2005
As usual, your writing is surberb. When are you loading your next story?
| Eileen Harris chapter 54 . 9/19/2005
I've read all the earlier parts and I think you may actually be getting better. (Tough to do since I thought you were doing pretty well already.) I like the things you've done with the characters, but I have a little problem with Amanda not wanting to have a child. If you'll remember when she met Anne and what she said about Kenny, you might want to rethink her attitude or build a reason for it changing.
Thanks for writing.
| colorfree chapter 54 . 9/18/2005
Whew! So happy you kept Phillip alive. :o) Once again thank you for a well thought out story. Loved it.
| D chapter 54 . 9/18/2005
The ending - jumping to an epilogue - seemed a bit abrupt. I'm glad to see the storyline will continue wither Volume 2. I hope we'll learn more about this mysterious immortal who'd seen Derrick in his teacher's memory. Why did he see Derrick? What's so special about this other, apparently ancient sword?
I anxiously await the next installment.
| Sarai chapter 54 . 9/17/2005
Elle, I enjoyed this story. I was surprised to see this chapter as an epilogue. I feel you kind of leaped and left a lot out. I hope the next book will have a better fit. In general, I did enjoy this story.
| D chapter 53 . 9/17/2005
AH! Don't leave us hanging, please!
| Sarai chapter 53 . 9/17/2005
| Sarai chapter 52 . 9/16/2005
Glad you killed the bad guy. Nice chapter.
| stcobb chapter 51 . 9/15/2005
More right now!
| Sarai chapter 51 . 9/15/2005
Good job! I hate cliff hangers! LOL
| colorfree chapter 50 . 9/15/2005
Not that you will change what happens next since you've probably already written it, but if Phillip is killed I will be so very VERY upset. Just thought I'd share.
| stcobb chapter 50 . 9/14/2005
Of course you would stop there...
| Sarai chapter 50 . 9/14/2005
Nice job! I hope the bad guy is dead.
| Sarai chapter 48 . 9/11/2005
Nice chapter. Update soon.