Yes Padme learns a lot about the Jedi that shouldn't be. But on it is a fanfic so it be anything right? Fine well done right a doc that is just nonsense.

So-Well-written-
Strongin -the force-
Take-a-bow !

I can’t

Well Done, Amber…!
The Ending was perfectly done- and much needed… you create believable
Obi , Padme stories…and all the others as well) with your special ability to change the characters , while keeping them in their true form with SW AU !

Captivating! Great Finale !

This was a beautifully done story. I really loved it! I wasn't sure how I felt about Obi-Wan and Padmé ship at the beginning of this story but I grew to love the pairing as the story progressed. It also fixed one of my problems with star wars how such a smart women like Padmé was so blind to her husband's troubled emotions and did nothing to try to help him more

This is terrible can't obidala writer's do something other than cringe and bashing anakin what a joke.

That was like a Cersei and Jaime moment lol

I agree with some of the others who have reviewed, you can spin it all you want but Padme is a pretty bad person in this. No not Vader bad or anything of course. But she was the one that pushed anakin to the dark side. Sad really if anakin had had a better wife I don't think he would have turn to the dark side.

This was ok to start with but as it went on i found myself not enjoying it.

Yes... in both movies fact that she fell in love instantly made zero sense. fact that they married shortly after confused me even more.

You actually made Obi wan and Padme into horrible horrible people.

I had hopped they could have saved the babies or the kids

Hum... You can try to make him the bad guy all you want but in the end Anakin was right to be suspicious. I mean written from another perspective, it's the story of a woman who deceived her husband, all but cheat on him, drove him into madness and ultimately to his death...

Loooooove this fic so much! Especially the justice you've rendered to Padme's character...how she never gave up at the end, how she's a fighter. That's her character in episodes 1 and 2 and how it should have been in episode 3. So thank you so much for writing this!

The movie now makes much more sense within this context of your writing...I'm intrigued with this new turn of events. Thank you!