Reviews for Starting Over: Do You Want to be Friends?
tacaloking chapter 1 . 7/18
the rest of the storys about ranma being rape you wrote i still like this one i dont i found this story when i was about 14 i think with most of the story you wrote and now that im 22 my views have defiantly changed and this story is so over the top with how the characters react to anything to do with rape its like a bad soup opera while you do a good enough job with the rest of your storys this one is so over the top it becomes hilarious im sad to say this story would most likely only be able to be taken seriously by a young teen which is probably why i liked it when i was 14 i tried to read this for old times sake but i can only make it two chapters before i have to stop because im laughing so much i would suggest a rewrite of this because ii seen the rest of your storys and this is the only one i just cant no matter how hard i try take seriously i think a re-wright would do a world of help but i do have to thank for a good laugh i have not laughed like that in ages and it hurts im sorry for being so harsh but i felt i should be honest
god of all chapter 27 . 5/27
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
maryjane5000 chapter 27 . 6/16/2012
You did a great job with this fic, I read another similar to this where Akane finds out Ranma is Ranko, Genma runs, Ranko reunited with her Mother, healing only to have someone (I think Kodachi) deliver her to Genma who redoes the Nekoken training, then Genma is either punished or killed (forget which) but threw out Ranma personality remains dominant
Ranmamania running wild chapter 15 . 6/15/2012
Did u ever notice that 95% of the Fics where Ranma is raped it's Nabiki who helps out more because she was also raped the other 5% it's Nabiki who befriends Ranma & helps her threw it
Y2Ranma chapter 13 . 6/15/2012
Love it so far, although I don't think you needed to add Yugioh-Oh to it but see where it goes however I wish you'd have done two things

1st that you had established more of a time line as I keep wondering if this is "Before Herb or After Herb" & if it is "After Herb" why didn't Ranko snag some of the locking water incase she ever did get free from Genma

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2nd that you would have had the amazons in the story by now
The Ranmazon chapter 9 . 6/15/2012
I found a mistake in this chapter, you have

"You mean Genma?" Nodoka asked, shocked. Did Genma do something to Akane to?

"Nay, Auntie, but it was the fool Ranma Saotome." Nodoka said.

"Nay, but the son of Genma Saotome." Tatewaki said, "He claimed to be of one mind and one body."

shouldn't it be

"You mean Genma?" Nodoka asked, shocked. "Did Genma do something to Akane to?"

"Nay, Auntie, but it was the son of Genma Saotome, the fool Ranma Saotome." Tatewaki said "he claimed to be of one mind and one body with the pigtai...cousin Ranko"
animefreak 171 chapter 27 . 4/27/2011
this was the first ranma1/2 card captor fanfic iv read and i realy enjoyed it im adding it 2 my favorites
animefreak 171 chapter 26 . 4/27/2011
did u ever notace that anny time ranma terns out to realy b a girl that most of the charactors get realy over protective of her?
wolf to the hound to the 134 chapter 2 . 10/17/2010
eh...it feels really rushed to be honest. I think that the problems are just solved way too quickly to be believable. Work on that.
Taeniaea chapter 27 . 8/10/2009
Great Story
YuriFan5 chapter 27 . 6/26/2009
Wow, Perfect ending! I love this story so much. Is Bakura gonig to get his own body now? It would be kinda awkward if he changed personalities in the middle of taknig a bath together or something equally embarassing *wink wink*. I came up with a great name for the next story, or at least the first chapter in the sequel. Call it, "Courage and Honesty, Pre-Requisites for Love"
YuriFan5 chapter 19 . 6/26/2009
hehe, Catwoman reference, nice! At first I said, "no, you didn't" but then I said, "Yeah, you totally did, way to go!"
YuriFan5 chapter 11 . 6/26/2009
Wow, with Tatewaki like this, I might just let him off my "virgin for life" list.
YuriFan5 chapter 2 . 6/26/2009
Well, I was kinda dissapointed that you just sprung(sprang?) the whole, CCS bit on us last chapter without much of a build up to it, so it came across as hurried, but this one is much better. It would add some dramatic effect if you had Ranko show Akane some of her scars, and mention that some of them AREN'T from the neko-ken training, if you catch my drift.
Saggit chapter 20 . 6/7/2008
Ye gods. It's one thing to write about what we don't know, which many fiction writers do, but quite another to create believable characters in credible situations. Your complete lack of understanding of what rape entails detracts so very strongly from whatever else you may offer the reader.

I strongly suggest you do some serious reading on the subject, both from a clinical and personal perspective. Again, not because rape is a Serious Subject, but because you want people to suspend disbelief when they read what you write.
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