Reviews for The First Pancake
moonshadow2012 chapter 3 . 1/15
Awww. I love both of those pancakes.
Whirlwind421 chapter 3 . 12/29/2011
Great story! I really liked the analogy!
MoonWiccan6 chapter 3 . 8/25/2011
Very sweet :-) I loved it!
Cutter12 chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
I enjoyed this story very much with these parts -

"but that blackened pancake marked a truce that ended weeks of tension between the brothers leading up to graduation. The ritual of the first pancake, taken to an extreme, had allowed them to express things they couldn't say. For Don, it had been both an outlet for his spiteful resentment of his genius brother and a way to seek reassurance that Charlie still needed him. For Charlie, accepting Don's challenge had felt like a rite of passage."

"So, what you're saying is, given enough time, the first pancake can turn out okay?"

"Something like that."

Don nodded. "Good to know."

being my favorite.
Jazmingirl chapter 3 . 3/13/2010
awe so sweet
Bunny1 chapter 3 . 11/2/2009
Aw... unbelievable sweetness:)
Bunny1 chapter 2 . 11/2/2009
Aw, sweet little Charlie-Bear... and poor Donny... they're so sweet;)
Bunny1 chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
What a DOUCHE...
Iawen Londea chapter 2 . 10/2/2009
Aw, this fic is great! I'm so glad you wrote it! Great job. :)
csimesser1 chapter 3 . 9/26/2009
that was great loved it
Whispering Darkness chapter 3 . 8/6/2008
Very cute story! - I loved it!
tinkrbell225 chapter 3 . 7/7/2008
very good job it was a nice look in to there childhood
N'kala chapter 3 . 3/27/2008
I just loved this story! It was so cute!
Lutralutra chapter 3 . 9/27/2007
This was really cool. I love the way you play on the "first pancake" theme the whole way through without seeming repetitive. A lot of sweet Don-Charlie moments, and great writing. So cute, definitely a favourite!
Threll chapter 3 . 12/28/2006
That was beautiful and just so adorable. I loved every part of it, especially the part about the charred, blackened pancake.

Very nice metaphor and a wonderfully executed idea.

Favourited for sure.
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