Reviews for The First Pancake
Lady Asphodelic chapter 1 . 3/11
This deserves more reviews.

To be honest, when I had first read this story, and just to see how the tutor reacted to Don and Don's response to the tutor's 'insult.' You really taught me something here. I love pancakes, even the first pancake. ;) Screw the tutor. Puts up obscene gestures.

Anyways, this is great. Going to re-read the other chapters now. *winks.*
wordsofawitheringwriter chapter 3 . 3/21/2016
I didn't know I needed young Eppes brothers until now(': I'm a little late to the Numb3rs party, but still, thank you so much for writing this!
moonshadow2012 chapter 3 . 1/15/2015
Awww. I love both of those pancakes.
Whirlwind421 chapter 3 . 12/29/2011
Great story! I really liked the analogy!
MoonWiccan6 chapter 3 . 8/25/2011
Very sweet :-) I loved it!
Cutter12 chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
I enjoyed this story very much with these parts -

"but that blackened pancake marked a truce that ended weeks of tension between the brothers leading up to graduation. The ritual of the first pancake, taken to an extreme, had allowed them to express things they couldn't say. For Don, it had been both an outlet for his spiteful resentment of his genius brother and a way to seek reassurance that Charlie still needed him. For Charlie, accepting Don's challenge had felt like a rite of passage."

"So, what you're saying is, given enough time, the first pancake can turn out okay?"

"Something like that."

Don nodded. "Good to know."

being my favorite.
Jazmingirl chapter 3 . 3/13/2010
awe so sweet
Bunny1 chapter 3 . 11/2/2009
Aw... unbelievable sweetness:)
Bunny1 chapter 2 . 11/2/2009
Aw, sweet little Charlie-Bear... and poor Donny... they're so sweet;)
Bunny1 chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
What a DOUCHE...
Iawen Londea chapter 2 . 10/2/2009
Aw, this fic is great! I'm so glad you wrote it! Great job. :)
csimesser1 chapter 3 . 9/26/2009
that was great loved it
Whispering Darkness chapter 3 . 8/6/2008
Very cute story! - I loved it!
tinkrbell225 chapter 3 . 7/7/2008
very good job it was a nice look in to there childhood
N'kala chapter 3 . 3/27/2008
I just loved this story! It was so cute!
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