|Reviews for More Than Just Paperwork|
| Genomaxis2005 chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
It's been years since this was posted but I still felt like reviewing.
This is a nice poignant piece and I agree with your note at the end.
Now that the Naruto series is done and moving onto this children, well...
Anyway the birds were a nice touch of symbolism.
| M2J MandalorianJedi chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
If this fic isn't finished, I highly reccomend posting another chapter. It truly is a fantastic fic. I LOVE IT! Fantastic job!
| Mrriddler chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
Hey, this needs an angst warning. I agree wholeheartedly that this would be what Naruto would do but that sucks especially given the life he's led. Good work for capturing the emotions correctly.
| dreamlifter chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Liked this story very much. liked the constructs you used such as 'its not all paperwork', the birds and the use of konohamaru.
very well done and concieved
| Xinthos chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
I totally agree with you on that aspect. I think that if it would make his friends happier he'd give up what he wanted. I like the metaphor with the birds, I didn't really understand it until the end.
| Dark Lil Corner chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Now that was very poetic. Normally, I don't like anything having to do with Sakura and Sasuke, but since this was more about Naruto and how he felt about those two, I didn't mind.
A very touching piece. The imagery with the birds was a nice addition.
| Raina chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Short, sweet, to the point. Well written and existing perfectly as a oneshot. Wouldn't be surprised if this happened, lol.
| madnarutofan chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
woah, uber sad..
| Houtori chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
That was so sweet... Just like Naruto to do that actually... I'm glad he's the Rokudaime here!
Keep it up!
| Heaven's Judgement chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Pretty sad and touching. Really like the metaphor you used with the birds didn't understand their significance until the very end.
| MingShun chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
A story without conflict...it's relaxing. Definitely worth reading. I'm glad everyone's safe and healthy. This is great! Thanks!
| Ardonius-Servant-Of-Zeta chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
Naruto is a good Rokudaime. He understands the point of a Hokage, to protect everyone in the village and make sure everyone is happy, even at the cost of his hapiness and health. Thus, I give you 9/10.
| DanieLuvsPyro chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
Aw sweet! I had a goofy little grin on my face the whole way through. I'm a fan of Kakashi as the 6th, but I really like this piece. Thanks!
| emilyasia chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
| vedmid chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
That was great. The dialouge, particularly Naruto's was excellent.