Reviews for Why Must The Young Die First
TheCrimsonGhost309 chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Ok...that totally made me tear up...

Great story though!
Pineapple Moon chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
i cried so much i could barely read the letters. T_T
Riza wanna be chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
ok do u enjoy killing hawkeye? i've read 2 of ur storys and she des in both! they r good storys but stop killing her! plz and thank u!
Hajan Rana chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
Much love and respect for this oneshot in my heart.
Envie chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Aww! So sad! *sobs* I love Riza-chan to death (not like THAT, Sophie!), and if she died...

Only thing I can see is in the last few lines:

Why must the YOUNG, and beautiful, die so YOUNG?”

Might just be me, but that doesn't quite make sense. Still, I was crying by the end of that, and not much can make me cry! *grabs a box of Kleenex*
TheCrazyRoyFan chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
You just love making me cry! *now sobbing after reading this and Burning Bridges* I had always wondered what really would have happened if they had gotten there to help Hughes. I never thought of it that way... Wow... and I thought I sobbed when Hughes died... I probably would have sobbed harder if Riza really died. I'm a huge Royai fan. Roy and Riza look so cute together. I love how you write. It's great.
RavenSabel chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
I cried. This is a good story though I'm still crying. Ugh..See you soon Hawkeye.
Strawberi Pocky Stix chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
You...killed off Riza...the bestest female character in the show...*sobs uncontrollably* I sobbed when Hughes died...but if Riza died, I think Roy couldn't go on...

Very good fic though! -
NiCh90 chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Hey great story.

You almost made me cry

I still loved it