Reviews for Perimeter Defenses
frannie chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
omg, ive pissed myself laughing.

what did you put in his contract is the best line ever. rofl
intstebri chapter 1 . 3/14/2007

Why I found, again, this one too small! Okay, I understand your need to follow the TV Serie, but why I think you had been a very great "episode writer" for Cameron? I shouldn't be so wrong...

Sorry, I have to "bounce", I have plenty others stories to read! Kept writing!


(still sorry for my english)
TigrouAngel chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
"By the power vested in me as your therapist, adjunct-activist, second-in-charge boat-rocker, and chief courier I now declare you to be boyfriend and girlfriend. … You may now bicker."

This is SO funny! Great story
lkaplon chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
What? That's it? Come on, there's not even any smoochies! However, I loved Bling's little speech. For a first fanfic, it's awesome!
a fan chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
Excellent first effort. I really liked the talking over each other. The ending was great. I was wondering how they were going to get out of this one. "Laugh it off. Cool." You came up with the perfect solution for this point in their relationship.
alexiasbooks chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
"I don't think he really has that authority," she stated simply. - I love that line. This story is great. It's very entertaining.
Maia2 chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Hee! I like this story. It's very sweet and believable. Bling was really cute, and you managed to give us some serious insights at Max's and Logan's insecurities, while keeping the story "light". Very well done.


maggieann452 chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Maria656 chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
Excellent, but it feels like there should be more. I love Bling taking over and throwing his fit.
Babyangel86 chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
cool love the tone of the chapter... hope to see more updates, its definitely looking up...

whats situation where you refereing to when you said "Logan could not remember the last time he was at such a loss for words. Yes, actually, he could."

i realise its somehting that most would recognise, but i havent actually watched a dark angel episode in years, although i do still read loads of fanfiction...

ne ways, i do like what i read, and hope you update soon...
acer-sigma chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
Quite an enjoyable story for your first time around. Hope to see more M/L stories from you in the future.

Plus since your new, you might want to check out some of the stories by sseattle, toblerone and WyldeGod. WyldeGod has an interseting take on a darker season 2.
Kyre chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Ooh, new S1 fic! While I can't see Bling declaring Max and Logan boyfriend and girlfriend, I do like the fact that he got fed up, and I love the way Max and Logan tripped over each other's words like they did so often on the show. Please keep going.
laceandpaperflowers chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
I DID like this and would like to see more from where it came from!

-the one who told you to post it
MistressBeasley chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
No! Don't stop. Please! I'm totally liking the way you just jumped right in - nose plugged, all that. Nicely done. I wanna' know what happens...
kill bill rocks chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Since its your first review i'll go all out. I liked your story as it has good characterisation, good punctuation and you wrote it extremely well. Not many people can write fictions about the topic of max and logans togetherness, also you used nice vocab. However sometimes it came off a little boring and to me didn't have much...meaning..really. I think you would do better if you were to write something bigger or somehting small bit with plenty of action. Theres a lot of genres, try not to stick with romance too much. Well i've said my bit. I hope you write more stories and be merry, lol.
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