|Reviews for The Freshman|
| Ukchana chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
A little confusing. But very interesting.
It's hard to write a death-fic. I think a lot of people don't understand. It's kind of sadomasochistic, isn't it? Because if you really write it *right*, you have to get into their heads, and to do that is to suffer exactly what they are suffering.
I think you did it well. But then, I'm not in your head, so I don't know if you made yourself suffer. If you did, you're braver than most people. _
I guess it's OOC, but really, when tragedy after tragedy happens to someone, they start to lose it. The boys were already far from sane. I don't really see it as OOC myself. I think you did great.
Kudos to being brave enough for a story like this. I'd be interested in reading something longer that dealt with the true insanity that being a gundam pilot could bring one to . . . but that might be asking for too much. _