|Reviews for Tragedy Makes Love Shine Through|
| heather1021 chapter 6 . 9/16/2005
yay! they are together! finally! now if only that happened on the show! i hope it does! plz update soon!
| amandeezy chapter 5 . 9/4/2005
i loved this. please update soon! ruthie and martin are my favorite couple
| Ghostwriter626 chapter 5 . 8/15/2005
stupid cliffy bad bad bad
| Kiroscura chapter 5 . 7/22/2005
I like the plot, but a few things could do with changing:
1. You need more description; right now, your story is mainly dialogue, (which you're doing very well with), but it doesn't complete the story.
2. You're not letting the character's actions reveal their feelings and motives. If you don't tell us why they do what they do as often, I think it will make your story a little more deep.
3. You've made some grammatical errors. Just check more carefully in the reread next time. :-)
All in all, I like your story. Good work.
| Babs567 chapter 4 . 7/22/2005
Aww! That was so sweet!
| heather1021 chapter 4 . 7/21/2005
that was great! update soon plz!