|Reviews for Sir Percy and his lady|
| Child of Dreams chapter 2 . 11/29/2016
It's "lose" and "losing", not "loose" and "loosing".
| Child of Dreams chapter 6 . 7/5/2016
Oh, for the sake of my sanity, please hurry up and update already!
| Fireballtrainer chapter 6 . 5/19/2016
I really enjoyed reading this story. I think you captured the characters' personalities well. I hope you will continue the story someday!
| MontyPythonFan chapter 6 . 2/16/2010
Fabulous few chapters! Please dont say youve given up on it!
| Fleur24 chapter 6 . 4/28/2009
I absolutely loved the first part of this story. It shows you how deeply Armand and Percy love Marguerite. I also really like the 3 parts of Chauvelin's Rage. I loved seeing his point of view. it was quite interesting
| Fleur24 chapter 2 . 4/22/2009
This is so Interesting. I couldn't stop reading it. Its one of those stories that you can't put down.
| Captain Weirdo chapter 6 . 5/8/2008
This is excellent! I love it. I hope you will continue it soon. You have grasped the characters perfectly and love the background you have given Chauvelin for his hatred of Percy.
I can't wait to read more!
| shleprock chapter 6 . 1/9/2008
it's good! the scarlet pimpernel is one of my very favorite books and you have captured the same feeling in your story so keep going.
| Firepelt chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
Aww! Poor Percy! he must feel horrible...
Anyways... After the 6th paragraph, it seems like the seventh should be part of it, but it isn't. So yeah. But great job.
| MusicalMaryann chapter 6 . 4/15/2007
Hello, Im loving your fic! Are you planning to update it?
| Salt06 chapter 3 . 3/28/2007
| AlannaXJon4ever chapter 6 . 1/5/2007
no please don't stop here!
| H. R. Boulter chapter 5 . 4/20/2006
I WOULD whinge about how in the book Chauvelin does not love Marguerite... but I won't, 'cause it's your choice.
'Lose' versus 'loose' again.
| H. R. Boulter chapter 2 . 4/20/2006
It's 'lose', not 'loose'. 'Loose' is when you let something go, but 'lose' is when you let it go accidentally.
And once you said 'deemed', not 'demmed'.
And once you said 'English gentlemen', not 'English gentleman'.
So all in all, very good, loving it, but you might want to check your spelling. And un-modernize some of your language. You know, percy saying 'or something'. It'd be okay if he said: 'or something akin to that'. Or whatever. It's just a modern expression.
And 'pretty soon'. Just a tad modern for this story, somehow to my mind it doesn't fit.
Otherwise, LOVIN' IT!
| H. R. Boulter chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Oughtn't there be an apostrophe in 'Odd's life!'? Because it originated from 'God's life' and then they had to change it because it was blasphemy, or something like that. But it still has the apostrophe.
BUT I LOVE IT! It's on my alert list. It's so.. so AAW...