Reviews for Sectumsempra!
MsIloveVampires chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
omg poor draco :'(
me1234567890 chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Very good this my favorites, besides being my favorite part of Harry Potter.
weasley-twins-41 chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
excellent! Loved it!

Aw man, malfoy tried to cut the Mark out? cutting is not gonna work, dude. That mark is there forever...
BiSciFiGuy chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
OMW, this was amazing! My favourite part in the book was just made better! I really think that this is how that scene should have ended, seriously (Someone should smack JKR). I loved that Draco went to such great lenghts to try and get rid of the mark!, but I'm a little sad that it's so short, I think it could be the start of an incredible story. Won't you please make it longer? *Begs*
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 3/31/2009

i was so happy when tom felton anounced on his website that they lengthened this scene. it's so beautiful! good job! it's defiantely going as one of my favorites
Ink and Parchment chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Sequel? This could turn out to be a beautiful continuance. I'm also glad that someone finally portrayed it the way it should be. I especially favor the part where Harry holds Draco; two humans bonding together.

Beautiful. Just beautiful.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
I loved that! It's so how i wanted it to go in the book, i was so disappointed snape came and all that, it could have been such a great way to make them friends... Well done, great detail. You should write the continuation of it. (please!)
JuMiKu chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
Please, this is begging to be continued! It's so cool!
ShadowHunter Mashell chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
I think this fic is really good but I know how you could make even better! You could continue with it and tell us how this little changes the rest of the book! lol doesn't that sound just wonderful? Well I think it does anyways this fic goes on my favorites and I hope you do decided to add more to it. -Mashell
Siiarrei chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
very good, and i defintely agree that this chapter of the book was begging to be rewritten, and you did a great job of it too, very well-done!
Caz chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Huzzah! I was hoping someone would tweak this chapter into something slashy, it really was asking for it! Maybe you could continue it, perhaps they can find a new use for the bath, or the soap...?
FelicisGranted chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
OMG! This was a much better ending to the chapter then the one in the book. For some reason I always hated the fact that Draco immediately took the offensive side so Harry never got to actually speak to him. If he hadn't then they could've come to an understanding. Keep writing alternate endings to the six book please? Especially the ones with Draco and Harry in them!
Sever13 chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
Yay! I love it! I love how you portrayed Draco, and Harry's inner realizations were well timed and...stuff. Now I'll stop pretending to know what I'm talking about and go read something else. Hope to read more from you!
spork princess chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
That was really good. I love Draco in this book. If only Snape hadn't...killed...well, I hate saying it! DRaco almost got put under protection! Evil evil evil. I think you did this well, very well.
SlytherinRomantic chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
love it! great idea!
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