Reviews for Of Ordinary Wizards
Guest chapter 22 . 12/10/2023
I love your story, as well as all the stories that take the time to build a redemption arc for both Draco and Snape. JK Rawlings didn’t, IMHO, build an actual redemption arc for Snape, he was just revelead to be on the side of the light from ages, but this didn’t do him any good, at least in life, and didn’t let him grow much… and Draco was a waste. Unwillingly to identify Harry at Malfoy manor, but still unsure whose side he was on during the battle of Hogwarts… just a coward and an opportunist, which is easier than building a credible story about a change of heart.
sarahsezlove chapter 1 . 9/3/2023
I’m hooked
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 33 . 7/28/2022
Uh, very confused about the ending. How did Harry and Snape forget like a year of their life? And there’s a Quidditch Table? Harry was sitting with his house! What twin houses are they talking about? I wish we didn’t have the time jump. It makes everything muddled and jumbled. Harry literally said he was the Gryffindor Quidditch Captain. Why would there be a sequel of him in Slytherin? That’s kinda annoying. So Voldemort killed Snape and Harry killed Voldemort. But they didn’t even destroy the final horcrux which was Peter’s arm. I feel like the ending is kinda underwhelming. But it was a good story. :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 32 . 7/28/2022
You did not just kill Snape! I’m very confused why Harry thinks somethings been a lie. What has been a lie? Where did Dumbledore’s portrait go? Also, Harry’s magic isn’t the tethered to Harry’s.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 31 . 7/28/2022
I’m so confused. Wasn’t Draco supposed to be delivered to? And I wish Harry could tell Ron what’s up. Harry has to know Snape has to do this! And poor Snape. He’s come to become fond of Harry! But why did Harry almost say Crucio? Was that the third time he’s be tempted into darkness?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 30 . 7/28/2022
Lmaooo! Harry’s using his spider abilities to scare Ron! What other Slytherin’s are there? Or is it only Goyle Senior and Draco? Why did Dumbledore not punish Sirius more severely for the werewolf prank? I loved the chocolate frog card! And Harry swallowed his first Snitch, he didn’t catch it between his teeth. Lol. McGonagall can back up Harry saying draco did in fact fight for the Light and save Harry. So Snape has a prophecy. And the third part says he’ll be faced with his own death while Harry will be tempted to give in to the darkness for a third time? When was the first and second time?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 29 . 7/28/2022
He gave Harry a squeeze on the shoulder! I can’t wait to see how the Gryffindor’s and Slytherin’s come together in the Great Hall. Shouldn’t Harry’s birthday be soon? Loved the story of William. Damn. Also, Harry hasn’t had thrashing in his life. He’s been abused his whole life. There’s a difference. I hope Harry and Draco keep training together. :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 28 . 7/28/2022
I hope Harry tells Snape and Draco he was almost sorted into Slytherin. Love that Harry tried to make Draco and Snape laugh. McGonagall needs to hear Snape out!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 27 . 7/28/2022
Remus, you need to be with Tonks! Love that Draco was astonished that Dobby is teaching them. Lol. I’m glad Snape is okay. How did Harry get into the Slytherin common room anyways? Isn’t it password protected?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 26 . 7/28/2022
I like Harry and Draco working together. Nooo! Remus and Tonks need to be together! And Harry and Ginny need to be together! I wish we had seen Snape punish the Slytherin’s. A lot of fics make it so Snape punishes them in private and comes up with interesting punishments that aren’t detention and taking points. Love that Kreacher helped them. Why did Dobby call Harry Master? Can he not help it call him that when he’s bound to him?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 25 . 7/28/2022
Harry should be calling McGonagall “Headmistress.” I wish Ron and Hermione could join Harry and Snape! Maybe closer to when the battle will begin?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 23 . 7/27/2022
I love how they’re slowly becoming what I would call, friends. And Snape decreased the wards on his potion cabinet so the Weasley’s could finish their swamp? Nice! Wonder how he knew they needed his potions. And I’m surprised Umbridge made some Slytherin’s write with the Blood Quill. I’m glad Harry wasn’t starved. And Harry and Snape comparing battle scars and stories was kinda amusing. Love that Dobby will be training Harry! He better not die! We’ve already had two to many people die! Also, what prophecy is there about Snape? That’s a twist that I forgot to comment about back when it was first mentioned. So did Dumbledore sort of push Snape towards becoming a Death Eater to make the prophecy happen? And who made the prophecy? Wonder how Dumbledore knew of it. I want Ron and Hermione to join Harry! As well as Ginny! Great chapter. :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 22 . 7/27/2022
I’m glad Draco is safe. And damn, how did McGonagall know it was really Snape? Does Harry know he’ll be teaching DADA on Sunday’s? Lol. I’m guessing it will be in the Room of Requirement? Love that Draco has been tasked with creating a team of Slytherin spies. He won’t be one since he’s out of favor with Voldemort. Has Harry turned 17 yet? I’m glad McGonagall knows Dumbledore is still around. Sort of. Hopefully his painting in the headmasters office wakes up. :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 21 . 7/27/2022
Damn. Harry has to write five feet of stuff? I’d suggest making the flashbacks/memories in italics and not bold text which can be harder to read. So Snape knows that Harry obliviated Filch. Why isn’t that spell one of the Unforgivables?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 20 . 7/27/2022
So Robert saw Harry use his wand. Uh….Anyways, love that they have a friend in town. Wonder who Liam is. I hope we see the Weasley’s soon! And Draco!
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