Reviews for Happily Ever After
samiamf69 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
it was so good, and so sad.
ChibiLady chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
So sweet...yet so poignant! I'm definitely favoriting this! I'm gonna check out your other stories!
Miss Itachi Uchiha chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
omg, omg! Many kudos to you! I absolutely loved the story and how it flowed together. It was just amazing and it made me tear alot! Great job again!
nitaBonita chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
this was really sweet but it made me cry, but i still enjoyed it
1N1GMA chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
damn! not fair! why do u hav to kill riku! grr!

but i admit, u made me cry...*talking to self* gosh...stupid tears doesnt stop faling...grr... was really sad...wahh! aww...i feel soory for dark...T_T

anyways...good job...this is soo true tho...

it not always happily ever after...wah...
Heart's Door chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
That was a very good one-shot. It was well-written and obviously written from the heart. It was pretty touching. Although, I must say, I wish Riku had at least let him TRY to save her. But that probably would have made her death worse for him, wouldn't it?

Anyway, I think your little introduction thing that the priest said during the ceremony was really kawaii! It's absolutely the best thing that anyone could ever say at a wedding! :) Do you mind if I copy it down? (I won't put it in a story and claim it's mine or anything like that!)

Oh, and by the way, the last part, at the end of the story, about Dark's soul wandering (you know, that last paragraph) it reminded me of that movie called Million Dollar Baby. Did Dark really commit suicide?
Elantil chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
That's so sad... Sniff... I never believed in happily ever after endings and always prefered sad endings but this is so sad... It's all your fault Arcacia!

Arcacia: ... It's times like this I hate being Death...

Please write more... Sob...
star-chan chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
this is so sad...*sniff sniff* but really good
Licensed chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
((bawling)) I can't believe that Rilu died! And on her wedding day! With Dark! I've always thought happily ever after could never come true... Even though I am a romantic, still waiting for my prince charming... That's why I'm not going to get married! ] But this... this fic... is so beautiful! And guess what? I cried! I actually cried! Yup, that's right, and it's the most I cried for any oneshot. In fact, this is the first oneshot that made me cry! Congrats, your fic is added to my "First Things" list!

existence92 chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
*sniff* Uwah!
robyn chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
omg... that's so sad.. *sniff* crap, i'm crying still... lol

Great story )
Amatsuki chapter 1 . 10/30/2005

*sniff* oh gawd. poor Dark. T_T

Have to admit though, I almost bailed on this story when the first part failed to grasp my attention and when someone mentioned a spoiler in a review but..glad i didn't! Great work! D
SinfulSkye chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
This is so good!
Zukirin chapter 1 . 9/30/2005

TTxTT So sweet and so sad~ I love it.


:) It was beautiful. You had some gorgeous lines in there. My fave was "I'm sorry I couldn't be your princess."
Katana Blade chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
This is the first fanfic that has ever made me cry. I never thought one would be able to, but you managed to get past my wall. I had to shut the door to the computer room so my mom in the next room wouldn't see me crying! In fact, I'm still wiping my face. I just can't believe it! Yours is the best one shot I have ever read, even though the ending is sad and I usually like happy endings (so why was my songfic sad? I have no idea). This is seriously the best, and you and this fic are going on my favs list. I loved the way you had flashbacks of the preists words, and the way this was structured and referred to fairy tales. And I'm a stickler for endings too, and I have to say yours was perfect, just as perfect as the rest of it. Man, how long did it take you to write this? You got the emotion across very well (obviously, since I was crying! Even before I read the last sentence!) This is so awesome!

And sorry for the wicked long review! Thanks for reviewing mine, and I'm sorry I gave you another idea. Actually, not really. lol. I love your writing, so I'm glad I've inspired you! Haha.

Katana Blade
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