Reviews for Confrontation of Hearts
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Very nice! I love these kind of stories. I hope you make more stories about Ash and May. I love them as a couple.
ZachaRicO chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Nice job! I really like this story.
Personally, I don't think Ash would do that much swearing, though. Here he sounds like he cusses like a drunken sailor (to borrow ProtonJon's phrase). I thought the first time he did it when he asked Drew "what the hell" he was doing was perfect, but other than that it just sounded forced.
Is Nascour supposed to be the same Nascour from Pokemon Colosseum?
What the heck was with the snails? Is that an actual French dish, or did that restaurant just have horrible conditions?! Lol, I loved the way Ash messed up in there with the French language and how you broke the fourth wall in the park.
Nice work!
Advanceforeverandafter chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
I loved this story! Wish it were even longer!
plattytehpwn chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
That was a nice read. _ Write more advanceshipping pl0x?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Me:May?
May:Yeah?
Me:Can I have a kiss on the cheek?
May:No because I would prefer to French kiss you!
We started to French kiss.
Me:Well that went better than I expected!
May:Yeah and your a great kisser!
Me:Thanks!
And before we knew it, May and I were making out.
May:I love you!
Me:Really? Because I love you too!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
What? It's over? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Anitoon3 chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Hi there!

This is good!

Yeah! I'm glad Ash beat Drew! 2 times! XD

Aw! I like that they call each other names! Heehee, may-may...

I like the ending! :)

Thanks for making this!

~ Anitoon3
Jake5791 chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
more more next chatper
Glam Girl chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Ha! THis story is so awesomem but you made some spelling errors:

wei - oui

hoeen- hoenn

The parts I liked most was

"Make it a double ham sandwich on rye!"

and

When Ash attacked the snails :)P
Ahjus chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
AHAHA! Some parts of that story made me LOL!
Pokemonmanaphy chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
well done, I really liked that. You deserve lots of praise!
DeathByGelato chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Awesome story.

And your story wasn't odd at all.
wolfsan11 chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
I like the way you wrote the battle between Swellow and Roselia but you made Drew into a real idiot...what's the point of using a grass attack on a flying pokemon? lol
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
hey uhm...nice story

pls. make a sequel

anyways...where did yu come up with "may-may"

and "ashy boy"

anyways...GREAT JOB!
TheGreatAnimeFan chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
It was an alright fic. Though I don't see Shuu as being this much of a jerk. I mean he's been friendlier to Haruka than this. I think you made him a little bit too much of a douche.
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