ok im curious about the bang bang i dont get it is it a gun?

Woah, honestly. This is what is called insanity!

... The way you chose the words, they way you set the lines... So great, so twisted, cruel, insane. I really like that one!

Oh.

My.

Ra.

I haven't had a fanfic captivate me like that in a long time.

I don't even have the words to describe this, it's beyond perfect.

Beautiful, twisted, unusual, incredible...

I LOVE IT.

xWithLoveFromKhaosKittyx

wow..that is beyond twisted. i love it! great job and kudos to all.

...okay...

oh my god! that's amazing! :)

Interesting... rather nice imagery there, and the odd spacing of lines works pretty well to add to the effect. The description of the Dark Bakura's actions are very nice, though the use of the fandom term "hikari" is a little annoying.

Still, it was pretty fun to read.

Woah Deep. It was awsome! I know I could never write like that i'm too happy-go-lucky.I liked it when he left its like a never ending cycle. That cool how you put it.

very nice I like it

woah...

i *think* i should not read your stories.

it leaves me blushing somehow "

i like it very much

omg that was amazing, I really loved it! Awesome job, poor Ryou-kun!

Ooh twisted and erotic. Nicely written, very nice. *grins* Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of your fics.

-Michiru

o.o;; wow...i got a bit confuse but that was really good...hope you write soon again!

Amazing story very well written a definate 10/10 You wrote it so that it is sweet and erotic all together very good