Reviews for Mirage
asdfhskdlfh chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
This was a great story, though there's just one thing that bothers me. The sun sets in the west, so there wouldn't be much of a reason to go to the eastern part of the encampment. Otherwise, well done!
MoonDemon101 chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
Smutty? I ABSOLUTELY LOVE Royai fluffiness! :D Nice fic!
Tsunade-chan chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
omg! kawaii!
Cashmeritan chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
i love it!
guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
wow... this wasn't too smutty at all! it's absolutely perfect. i like it when people portray roy in a sweeter light
Ceirwy chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
How cute! Poor Roy, the guy faces so much. I would love to have a grandpapi Roy! lol
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
If I know Riza, she'd say something REALLY mean. HAHAHAHA!
saffiremoon21 chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
I'm feeling too lazy to login XD this just makes me go AW XD
Lanati chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
e! That was cute and light feeling. However, I think you need to proof this a little bit. Just a couple typos here and there, nothing too horrible. Very good! Keep it up!