|Reviews for Halloween Party|
| Pizzapug789 chapter 20 . 11/12/2016
| Pizzapug789 chapter 14 . 11/12/2016
You spelled volleyball wrong
| Pizzapug789 chapter 7 . 11/12/2016
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww mushy lovey stuff.
| Maizon Ikkoku chapter 21 . 1/12/2016
| Melody Worden chapter 19 . 1/12/2016
Oh guess what we're mates!
| Maizon Ikkoku chapter 19 . 1/12/2016
Gramps sounds like Koga!
| trinity chapter 1 . 8/12/2015
i think that you did a great job better than most fanfictions but it would help if the whole thing was in english but other wise i loved it!
| Kagome chapter 25 . 3/27/2015
How about kamisyi for a girl and koyasha for a boy if there both girls than the first girl name up top and hetinale if both boys name up top and inuyoga.?
| Kagome chapter 3 . 3/27/2015
| Kagome chapter 1 . 3/27/2015
| LunarFay chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
The idea is cute (now I know that this was writen-oh god- 9 years ago, so your stile must have changed.
The Japanese is unnecessary & distracting. It makes readers stop & reword it in their mind. If readers don't know the words then they have to guess at words & just wonder what your on about.
You didn't put quotations around some of the speech (it is also disorienting).
So far the story is cute. I hope inuyasha just goes as himself or something with his ears viewable :3
Kagome would look good as a shrine maiden but if kikiyo just died then that's not the best idea ;
| demigoddesswarrior0133 chapter 21 . 5/19/2014
She should be pregnant such a good story so far
| Raining Daylight chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Good story but there are a few things you need to fix:
1)Spelling- Mostly good but there are quite a few errors.
2)Author's note/comment- These need to go at the end or beginning. They should not come in the middle of the story.
3)Contractions- When using words like don't and couldn't make sure there is an apostrophe.
| Guest chapter 31 . 3/27/2014
let me guess... koga? XD
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/23/2013
Defenetly not for kids but really good