|Reviews for Playing Cards|
| Frequency NecroKat chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
Great story! I like Yuri and Dimitri as characters. I laughed at the part where Yuri was showing his complete lack of interest in the cards.
Aside from a few grammar mistakes this is fairly well written. For advice in that category, when the speaker changes they get a new paragraph so that it's clearer who's speaking at the moment. Just that and a few misplaced comas are the only grammatical blemishes. the story itself is very interesting.
Keep up the good work, I'd really like to read more of this story!
| Nythology chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
Nice, I like it so far. Auf Wiedersehen.
| Traiden chapter 2 . 8/10/2005
Such a good story I think I will read and review it as you finnish the story... And any other stories you may so happen to wright... I can see you have potential. Anyway cant wait till the update. •
| Nick chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
I liked the story, overall. For a first timer, nice start. Especially since Mercenaries had very little storyline. And the character of Dimitri charmed me, because I'm using the same name for a character in a story I'm writing.
| Jai Tao chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Excellent keep writing!
| silence chapter 1 . 7/24/2005