Reviews for Playing Cards
Frequency NecroKat chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
Great story! I like Yuri and Dimitri as characters. I laughed at the part where Yuri was showing his complete lack of interest in the cards.

Aside from a few grammar mistakes this is fairly well written. For advice in that category, when the speaker changes they get a new paragraph so that it's clearer who's speaking at the moment. Just that and a few misplaced comas are the only grammatical blemishes. the story itself is very interesting.

Keep up the good work, I'd really like to read more of this story!

NK
Nythology chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
Nice, I like it so far. Auf Wiedersehen.
Traiden chapter 2 . 8/10/2005
Such a good story I think I will read and review it as you finnish the story... And any other stories you may so happen to wright... I can see you have potential. Anyway cant wait till the update. •
Nick chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
I liked the story, overall. For a first timer, nice start. Especially since Mercenaries had very little storyline. And the character of Dimitri charmed me, because I'm using the same name for a character in a story I'm writing.
Jai Tao chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Excellent keep writing!
silence chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
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