Reviews for Butterfly Kisses
I never promised chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
oh my, i loved it, i very much enjoyed it
avalon88 chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
This story was marvousely well written. I hope you write other stories.
singingstarryknights chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
I LOVED this. perfect characterization. whoa. just lovely.
safsren chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
short a sweet, just what I needed_
Seeker-of-Raven chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
I know you said the end, but I'd really enjoy reading more. I'd like to see how the relationship ends up and what made Sara take Greg up on his offer, and maybe what made her come to her decision that she did love Greg.
ObessedTWFan chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
I love it!, It's soo cute!
MKL chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
overall, the story is good, but I'm having problems with two sentences.

"Ever since he had first met her, he had been memorized."

And

"Greg wasn’t sure what it was about her that memorized him the most."

Now, maybe it's just me but they don't make much sense to me. Don't you mean "MESMERIZED" not memorized?

(memorize - to remember, mesmerize - to awe, captivate)

anyways, just a little thing. Aside from that everything's just lovely.

Keep up the good work.

MKL.

P.S. is a great friend of writers! :-)
chibigirl626 chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
*sniff* *sniff* *sobs* SO SWEET!
will-you-wont chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
AW OMG THAT WAS SO CUTE! more greg and sara! More!
Sugar Pill chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Aww, this was sweet. But it wasn't all fluff... which made it very believable. ;) Nice job!
saraluver chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
that was so sweet!
Jenny70529 chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Aw, how sweet...

I love mushy stuff sometimes! :-)

You're the best writer there is...what a great way to end the weekend! lol.

You're amazing.

Jenny
drury01 chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Very cute. Just one little thing, about a third of the way through it you said greg had been memorized, I think you meant mezmerized.
Padfoot4ever chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Great job!
SLynn chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Very lovely! :)