Reviews for The Journeyman Project 3: Legacy of Time
MAC the misc.writer chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Allright so far, but there are some changes I recommend.

1. Arthur's whole, "The good news is, I know why you don't know me, " conversation was allright for the game, but since in this book Gage can talk back, it would be better for Gage to actually explain why he has no memories of Arthur.

2. In JMP1 it was given that all time travelers give of some kind of detectable time-space energy imbalance called "Temporal Flux." I think Gage should scan Sinclair in Atlantis, and not detect Temporal Flux, thus making Sinclair's presence in Atlantis oh so much more mysterious.