|Reviews for Living on Borrowed Time|
| Guest chapter 33 . 3/28
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! You did a great job :)
| waddiwasiwitch chapter 33 . 3/17
Read this in one sitting and I really enjoyed it.
| XlariS chapter 33 . 7/22/2013
Lol i swear when i read the first chapter i was just about ready to strangle you
But honestly, i saw the genre also included supernatural so i guess i stuck with you after that
Man this is the first time a fanfic has ever gotten me worked up to a frenzy
But great job it was very very interesting to read
| Rainbowkittenism chapter 33 . 6/12/2013
That really was the most beautiful story I've ever read. It helped me get over the bittersweet ending to the original anime/CoS, which left me all depressed and stuff. Thank you. C:
| uhuhuhuhuhuhu chapter 33 . 1/9/2012
| LittleAlchemist chapter 33 . 12/20/2011
That was the best RoyAi Fanfiktion Ive ever read...!
Seriously, Im so stunned, happy and sad that the story is over...!
Just magnificent! :D
| Amara-nii chan chapter 33 . 9/10/2011
it is asowme i want a sequel u did great don't listen to people who say u did bad u did asowme!
| xXxRizaHawkeyexXx chapter 33 . 7/21/2011
i gotta say i loove this story!~
just passed the last 3 days or so reading it xD
| Gin Ichimaru Awesome chapter 21 . 1/10/2011
dose she still have the flames alchemy tatoo on her back?
| Hoprabbit chapter 33 . 11/22/2009
A few hours or so ago I reviewed this story at the sixth chapter. Then, I was fuming and sad, upset and confused. I called you nasty names and blamed you for crap.
ALL BETTER. ;D
You incorporated bits of the storyline, explained any questions anyone could ask(though I was too involved in reading to ask questions) And all around wrote very well. My only complaint was that Ed seemed just a little too... not Ed. XD And Al was less oblivious than I'd always seen him, but that's just me.
It was an INCREDIBLY /excellent/ story. And you can thank the picture. This morning I was looking up RoyxRisa on deviant, and found it. I clicked the link, and spent the majority of my day reading your fanfic. XD
At least it was worth it, right?
Anyway, you've officially made it to my favorite story of all time. I like this better than the anime. D
One thing more. The ending /was/ a little fluffy/cheesy. XD
-Love the story! Hop
| Hoprabbit chapter 6 . 11/22/2009
-First, I'd like to say, don't take /any/ of this as an insult, it's a very serious compliment.-
You're a horrible bastard(rather, bitch, as the case may be), you know?
I've cried every chapter since the beginning. I haven't cried like that since Hughes died. This is the only story, save Bodies in Beds, that has wrapped me up so emotionally in the story, that seems like it actually belongs IN THE SERIES. I'm not even done reading it, and I just had to scream at you, on chapter six, that you're killing me. SIX. CHAPTERS. OF. CRYING.
And for that reason exactly, this is tied at the moment for my favorite fanfiction of all time.
I've read a LOT of fanfiction.
So I figured I'd tell you that you're pretty much going to Hell for making me feel like this, But at least you're going down as an excellent writer. XD
Well Done. VERY, well done. I'd call you Hawkeye, but that's not exactly appropriate, is it? XD
-Love and reviews, Hop.
| Neopuff chapter 33 . 12/16/2007
Finally, is right! I stayed up till 4 in the morning so I wouldn't have to stop reading this half way through...
But it was worth it! You write great, and you draw really well, too!
Although I don't like the FMA anime, I'm glad I've seen the movie XD Or this wouldn't have made ANY sense...
Thanks for a great read ;D
| FidgeyTova chapter 33 . 7/28/2007
AHH! that was so good! i was a first a little hesitant to read the story when I saw that Riza died. But you did a great job with the story!
| FidgeyTova chapter 29 . 7/28/2007
AHH! you are a brilliant Royai author! please please please make more stories with all the fluffy Royai goodness! I'll be sure to read them!
| kasumi ryumizu chapter 33 . 3/29/2007
Hey, I've just read your work. It's kind of nice. I expected that Roy would learn about Riza's violation (rape). Hmm... I think it's better to mention it and see him more mad or Riza just wasn't raped at all...
Well, the whole fic included the movie. Have you read the manga? Riza's father was the original flame alchemist and Roy was his apprentice. That's how they met... His father died later and tattooed the secret of the flame alchemy on her back telling her that she should show it to someone who she thinks is worthy-and that is Roy, of course. Afterwards, they seperated their ways and they met in Ishbal. She as a young aspiring top sharpshooter. Code named: Hawk's eye. He as a state alchemist. The flame alchemist... Ever since, they've been subordinates...
The way you've written is good and less grammatical errors than most do. I praise you for that.
One last comment: Your epilogue's just too long. You could have written it as a chapter instead. *laughs and snickers*
Banzai, Roy and Riza forever!