Aw, that was absolutely adorable! It was well thought out, well written, and interesting, but mostly... it's adorable.

Does this mean we may get the story behind the Black Magician and the Black Witch at some point? If so, that would be cool. If not, this is cute enough to just re-read a few times.

A wonderful and beautifully written story. Valen and Alexander are quit intriging characters and I love the way you introduced them and how you worked out their characters and their background. Your writing style appeals to me greatly and I hope to read more from you soon.

Excellent suspense! O_o Oh my! This is written so well deary! :) You're such a good authoress! Poor Alexander...he must feel awful right now...I certainly hope Valen will be all right!

Billie: man that king is a jerk!

Lady: yeah it sounds like some dictatiorship !

Billie: i know and now some rebellion is going to happen and were going to have the Russian Revolution all over again!

Lady: yeah but we like the story!

Billie: i wonder who the royal pupil will be