Oh, I loved it! Really truly loved it! Please write more. I know you haven't written for like forever, but it;s never too long to write more. Please please please update! I am so loveing it! If you need any help with anything to do with Back to the future I'm here. I try to offer help to all the people that I love their stories. Please reply if able...

;) No problem. This fic is a nice take on the BTTF story.

Uh, spelling errors: 'paid', not 'payed', 'DeLorean' with a capital 'L', 'rarely', 'planning'... Actually I think most of them are just typos. You could try getting an online spell check.

It's not so bad. Sure, it needs work, but it's an interesting plot idea. If you're having spelling troubles, find someone to read through your chapters before posting them. Anyhow, don't give up too soon.

~E.D.

It's not that the story is bad, it's just that the BTTF section of fanficnet has been stagnating since the deletion of the fan fiction boards at ;P

So... interesting concept, but it's currently a bit too short for me to say much. There are some spelling errors, but other than that it's a good start. Continue writing!

hi! it's me. I'm reviewin' my own story cuz no one else will. I guess the story really sucks.