Reviews for When The Heartache Ends
Rebelcat chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Wow... oh, wow...

That was terribly sad, and absolutely gripping. And horrifying, too.

Those poor kids - you put me right into Hutch's head, and his pain was palpable.

Now that you've written all this hurt, I hope there's some comfort coming soon!
Alone Dreaming chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Sad, depressing, tragic but beautifully written and incredibly real. :) Keep going.

-Alone Dreaming
Creedo chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
OMG what a way to start a stroy. What a horrific scene, but so well written it captivated me. Poor Hutch. The way you described everything in this chapter was breath taking, even the part about Hutch doubting that starsky had taken the 'easy way' out. Masterful...Thank you
Kreek chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Hi,

What a sad beginning to this story. I can't wait to see where you're going with this. It looks like Starsky's handling the situation far better than Hutch is.

Kreek
merryw chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
Wow! What an amazing start to a story! You just jumped right in there, didn't you?

Poor Hutch - poor Starsky, poor kids, poor parents! What a tragedy. Very very well written though - I look forward to more.
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