Reviews for Oh, It's On |
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![]() ![]() I'm sorry, but if you're only writing to receive reviews, then you just LOST a reader. Those Author's Notes at the beginning of chapter 2 just soured my stomach, if you're going to hold the story hostage like that. If you're so self-centered to only write for reviews, then I'm out of here. (And yes, I didn't sign this review so you can't respond to it. Nyah!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! And Danny Is so...Awww |
![]() ![]() ![]() Danny lost a perfectly good moment to use a pun! When sam came out in the outfit he should have been like “dang, you’re drop DEAD gorgeous.” X’D fiddlesticks… |
![]() ![]() ![]() i looked at the axolotl it is way to cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahaha! Oh my gosh! I legitimately started clapping & laughing IRL at Tucker's 'Let There Be Light' line! XD What a fresh spin on the 'Since forever' cliché. Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOOOOOOOOOO! She just spat at The Bitch! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Va va va voom! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I agree really cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() That last chapter took me by surprise! XD loved the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay I will finally give you a Review after reading the whole I feel that I should do a vote like America's got talent or something. All together 1, 2, 3..."YES!" |
![]() ![]() Pallinae is stupid, shallow, attintion whore, a cunt and a bich |
![]() ![]() I also think they are cute, but the pinks ones are weirder when the ones with others colors, to me of course. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sam is someone you shouldn't annoy or tease... XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLZ MAKE A SEQUAL! (btw sorry for the bad spelling, im a music nerd, not a spelling geek. lol |
![]() ![]() i think i love it its an amazing story u should write more thanke u |