|Reviews for Hate|
| HanaTohruShipperMorgan chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
The ellipses (the ...s) took away the impact a little too much.
Other than that, it was pretty decent... Though, again, borderline emo-ness. This one was a little less so than the others, but it drew uncomfortably close.
Have a nice day!
PS - ...I've been signing these as Morgan, haven't I? Oops...
| Adi88 chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
Oh! But he's so little to be giving up...! Anyway, my likey supremely. Though it may be pushing into melodrama unless something really bad happened to him that didn't get mentioned.
| who cares chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
love it. wish it was longer, though
| Moroi Mikomi chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
YAY! You posted the challenge! I posted mine too, although I forgot to say it was a challenge. Oh well. You did a really good job with Hiro, hebi-chan! You should write more about him!
| Aquira chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
I liked it. Especially the last sentance because it fits Hiro a lot. It might have been short, but it was good.
| Thorn Willowfly chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Good job. You captured Hiro's true feelings so very well. I like it!
| simplewin chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Aw. Hiro is so angsty and cute ;_;
Very well done _