Reviews for Why
Kittens Kat chapter 18 . 1/23
Shoetsu Otaku chapter 2 . 3/20/2013
How old are the members of team 7? I'm confused.
SasuNaruLuver13 chapter 18 . 2/24/2013
Looved da story
Guest chapter 11 . 2/4/2013
Mizuke. I love R&V.
Guest chapter 18 . 11/28/2012
it was good but how come kiyoshi never asked why both of them are his parents because they are both men
Guest chapter 5 . 10/15/2012
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
that is one spicy meatball!
HopeSeiketsu chapter 3 . 9/26/2012
Not gunna review next chap it 12:42am and i have to wake up at 7:45 tomarrow
HopeSeiketsu chapter 2 . 9/26/2012
Thank for trying to fix typos
HopeSeiketsu chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
I think i will like it. It is also rather well written, which is surprising for a first fic. I meen no overly big grammer mistakes and well written.
Joanny-chan chapter 18 . 7/2/2012
Nice job on using lovely words, i loved the story, it makes me want to read it again, but i am tired i was up all night reading it, thats how much i enjoyed reading it. *cough* sorry i seem to be sick, ill reread it when i wake up, again thanks for the story and good night!;)
galpal818 chapter 11 . 1/22/2012
what link i cant find it
HollowGoku90's chapter 4 . 11/16/2011
i don't care if it yoia but this story is awesome nice writing the story. and this the first time i read a yoai or anything releted to yoai and sorry i don't spell right lol.
LvndrRsThrn chapter 18 . 7/26/2011
You seem to have a problem with your "there," "they're," and "their" 's, but that can be easily fixed. It was well written and had a good flow to it! ***** (Five stars) Looking out for other stories of yours.
KitsuneLuvr88 chapter 18 . 7/12/2011
awww i've always loved this story!
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