Reviews for Consummation
HeartsandEyesDelight chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
I initially didn't mind it, I'm just troubled a bit by their sexual dynamic. Lupin does sound preachy about his sexual past, as opposed to her, and withholding sex with that kind of superiority in a relationship is not only destructive, but seems like the kind of thing Tonks wouldn't put up with. Sure, if he's not comfortable, they shouldn't have sex. But the discussion should be less condescending, and when they do get to that point, doesn't it leave her a bit out of the loop for him to just decide, whenever he decides he's ready, that they'll progress to that intimacy? She's just hanging around, waiting for him to decide the extent to which he cares about her? ...It was kind of a deal-breaker for me.
ewriter chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
madAmeSaysWhAt chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Aw! I love it! And marvelous description...
Gil-Sara-4Ever chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
the-original-hufflepuff chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
Loved it, really hot!
Kileaiya chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
SQWEE! So lovely.
surreptitiouspen chapter 1 . 5/24/2006

Good ficlet, but a word of caution. I had one of my stories removed because of 'adult content' and they threatened to close my account. So, just be careful- Maybe just leave an author's note, saying that if people want to read this, email you, or put it up on Adultfanfiction . com.

mauraudersminuspeterarehot chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
so very very lovely!

you are a wonderful genius... its brilliant!
jessa-beth chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
So sweet, I can barely get over how adorable it is! _ I loved it!
Bardlover chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
I didn't review or find this story before? *shock* Great job!
casinojack chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
The story was really sweet, but not quite as good as your other ones. The one thing that took away from it was the kind of preachiness of Lupin being glad he had waited until he fell in love with a person to make love to them, etc. It just didn't feel natural. But if you fixed that , the story would be really great.
kathaania chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
Loved this! v. good! A couple of grammatical errors, but v. few. Hope to see more from you in the future!
Bel-O chapter 1 . 9/3/2005

I like your fic and I would like publish it in french...

So I have your permission? I'll write your name in the disclaimer of course and I'll write it's you the author!

(for my email, go to my profil)

BurrSquee chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
I love it. very good... hope you write more.
photojen chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Apparently I'm wandering around making useless comments on fics tonight.

That having been said, weren't they wearing any underwear?

I know if I were a werewolf, I would totally wear underwear.
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