|Reviews for First Step|
| AliasSpyCrazy chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Nice! I liked it. Very short and very sweet. You did a good job with your characters. Congratulations. Your first fic is great. Kudos, buddie. :)
So yeah, anyways back to my review, i really liked it.
| Fair Cate chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
That was simply beautiful. The whole storyline was so simple, yet it was perfect. Your description of their actions was amazing, although sometimes I found it difficult to follow whose actions you were describing, esp. at the end.
A amazing piece. I hope you share some more work with us!