Reviews for Of Loyalty and Traitors
SpeshaSpak chapter 10 . 5/16/2006
Good storie! i think ya got an interesting plot going here! can't wait till ya update!
Sky Samuelle chapter 10 . 9/27/2005
I must say I'm struck at your amazing capacity for character portrayals... Draco in particular was perfect in his struggle bt survival instinct and lingering decency... bravo!
MorganRay chapter 10 . 9/1/2005
I liked this chapter, and I like how you're developing your story. It's very dramatic, and I'm wondering if Draco is good/evil now that he's seeing Harry's past.
fhippogriff chapter 10 . 8/31/2005
Very interesting story. I have only read a few post-HBP stories, but they all seem to have Harry telling everyong about the horcruxes, not keeping them secret. The time turner of Draco's is a cool idea, too.
Nemo Returning chapter 10 . 8/30/2005
Why do I have this feeling that the next chapter is going to be a lot of fun? :)

Please update!
helloitsme-again chapter 10 . 8/30/2005
Nice little theory you hold here _ I loved to read it so far..
urges chapter 10 . 8/30/2005
That was a great chapter...

Let me guess, Draco is following Harry's past, not Dumbledore's... hehe...

Oh, and if I can make a suggestion, I think you should get a beta reader... I just saw in a few places were there was a word missing, or a typo, and I know from expirience that it is hard to proofread your own work...
Aidan chapter 9 . 8/23/2005
I've just read the first 9 chapters in one go. It's good: the pace of the plot is good, the style works well and nothing's been too outlandish so far. Keep it up!
kim chapter 9 . 8/22/2005
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DONT KILL LUPIN MY FAVORITE CHARACTER PLEASE LET SOMEBODY SAVE HIM!
kim chapter 9 . 8/22/2005
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DONT KILL LUPIN MY FAVORITE CHARACTER PLEASE LET SOMEBODY SAVE HIM!
anna chapter 9 . 8/22/2005
it's interesting ! i'm really curous where this is going, so good work !
Aubs chapter 8 . 8/21/2005
NO REMMY! *pouts* I wuv Remmy. *giggles* Soz, on sugar high! I like this story! Brill! :P

*Aubs*
MorganRay chapter 3 . 8/13/2005
This is a good story, and did you mention Draco got expelled? honestly, it doesn't surprise me. I personally think he might. Will Number 12 be able to still be the headquarters if Dumbledore dead, since he was the secret keeper? I didn't think about that, honestly, until i read that line in your story and was like, hmm, maybe, since all Dumbledore is dead, the secret can be told? IDK, if you say, so what, it's still the headquarters, fine. I can't change how you write your fics.

MorganRay
urges chapter 8 . 8/13/2005
The anticipation is killing me...

Great story by the way...

Wish I knew what Harry found... and I am just dying to know what will happen with Remus and Draco...

Update soon please!
MorganRay chapter 2 . 8/12/2005
I'll read more of this little story later. I like the way you tell it through Draco and Minerva's eyes, and I also think you're trying really hard to portray people accurately. Horray for correctness in grammar, too! Give me a while to keep reading, and I promise I'll get to it.
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