|Reviews for Captured|
| Twihardkristen-once chapter 30 . 4/8
aw love it
I can totally imagine this yet it's hilariously unrealistic
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
author clearly went back and deleted almost all negative reviews, worst story I have ever read. if I wanted insight into how a 13 year olds mind thinks high on hormones I would watch a backstreet boys concert.
this story is comical and not in a god way.
| ffadminsnc2003 chapter 5 . 11/13/2015
are you twelve or something? this is hands-down some of the most inane, idiotic, and pathetic fics I have EVER had the displeasure of reading. the sheer fact that you would attempt to author anything, let alone try to bang out some semblance of a story is offensive, to say the least. whatever plot you have deluded yourself into thinking you have come up with is comical and I strongly urge you to just stop before you embarrass yourself further.
please do not attempt to write anything beyond a grocery list ever again.
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/13/2015
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/5/2015
that bit about not minding being raped... is WRONG. you need help. seriously think about the victims out there! what is the matter with you? that was not funny!
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/5/2015
WHY would she take her top off? Like seriously? what the F?
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/5/2015
how did she go from despising him to having a crush on him?
| Angelus chapter 30 . 7/9/2015
Good grief! Finally, it's over. How, exactly did you manage to write 30 chapters of nonsensical crap? And then a sequel which thankfully I will NOT be reading. Coz really that does take talent. It was funny...sometimes but on the whole it immature and stupid. She acts like a five year old and he twirls his hair? Hahaha, utter rubbish. And really when I thought it couldn't get any worse, it was a complete lie? You sound twisted dear, maybe get yourself checked out...mentally
| Angelus chapter 14 . 7/9/2015
Yes it is weird...
| roon0 chapter 4 . 5/13/2015
Hermione is so brave and so funny.
| roon0 chapter 3 . 5/13/2015
I am laughing so hard.
| roon0 chapter 2 . 5/13/2015
| Katie chapter 30 . 2/11/2015
This was so cute!
| ocean of rage chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
I don't know if I'm going to enjoy this new annoying Hermione but this is rather amusing.
| The Lost Rogue chapter 30 . 12/1/2014
God this was hilarious! I found myself howling at practically every chapter! They have to be one of the most dysfunctional married couples out there,hehe :P