Reviews for Ophidian Like a Snake
Bluenose chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
I really liked this story, especially Web's oh so perfectly sneering view on Paul. I loved the last line as well, as I've spent most of the series wondering exactly what Web's interest in Rebecca is. Brilliant stuff, I'd like to see you lead this intro into a case file.
Melpomene blue chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Good Web musing. I'm just as impressed that you have their names down however since I keep drawing a blank everytime I think on it.
Jack E. Peace chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Oh my goodness. Now that was a good story. I absolutely loved it! I loved the way you wrote it, loved your word choice and the way you created the sentences to reflect a perfect picture of the team. Just beautiful. I also loved the stuff about Rebecca; as well as the comment about a cat being "too fuzzy" to represent her. The last sentence was the best, though. Genius. I hope you write more "Inside" fics. Continue your writing!