way too many notes, we don't need to know every single comment from the beta, and nobody cares that you're too lazy to explain where the clothes came from. it's unimportant to the story, and you mentioning it takes people out of the story.

Wow i like it!

Hi, it's me. I did finally read the story like I told you I would. It was a cute ending, I am always amused by Inuyasha's reaction to Kouga. Do you enjoy the sense of accomplishment that comes from finishing a story? I hope you do. Talk to you later.

LOL nope they wont, good story- but i think u should have kept it a comedy and not turn it into a battel fanfic but ohwell thax 4 entertaining meo

~nya~

InuKag 4 EVA!O XD LOL

JK NOT! *ps* i like the fact that kikyou was nice and helped kagome out*

YEAY!0

(hes a half doggy deamon again0)

ok iv always wondered if he can b sat as a human

and there was something els but me no remember'(

ohwell and whydjya make it so long and dramatic it ruins*sp*

the humor(

SO AM I!O uh a deamon in disguise i meen but im a cat deamon

. ~nya~! uh who said im a deamon im no deamon uh hehe;

(runs away screaming) AH!

THE CATS DEAMON LIKE SO OUT OF THE BAG!O

ok i was gunna tell u what kag should have wished 4 (b4 i read it)

but urs is so much BETTER!O

no on w/ the story oh wit isnt that ur line; *die KIKYOU did i say that! ok so i did* ~nya~O

that was really really really good...I LOVED IT!

Emily

cute ending!

Idiot...

In chapter 16, you say that miroku cannot use his wind tunnel because of all the beasts around him, but in a previous chapter, you say he no longer HAS his wind tunnel!

(All Kikyo haters start asking why (beta: WHY!) ...uh cause... Starts running as they chase me... okay continuing with the story!)

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(chaseing you) WHY! KILL KINY-HOE~! WHY!

I like it. I love "Shippo go BOOM!", it makes me smile. And brings back memories of convention but anyway, do you use Word to type these chapters? Because you need to use SPELLCHECK. Don't get me wrong, I love the story, it is clever and Fluffy(love fluff!Like the fluff of Sesshy's tail!, I just have this overwhelming urge to correct a few spelling errors. Here goes: Ch. 14:aloud is out loud, you want to use allowed, as in permission granted. That's in the note. Ch.15: It is not jewl, but jewel, precious has a c and an i, and when Owsumi is asking about the jewel at the begining of the chapter, you need a question mark after the "is it not", like "not?" I believe you mean to use delicious, cocky instead of cokey(don't think it's a word), scowled instead of sowled, and flouting is showing off, and that could be what you wanted to say, but for Owsumi's entrance I think you meant to say floated in, and desire not disire. Ch.16:Do not use tered(another nonexistent word) but torn(describing Sango) and the phrase reads better if you use "limping badly",and when Miroku is described if you say he has cuts, the reader is less likely to think he just ripped his robes. By the by, you are evil! That was a well done Cliff-hanger, and I will pressure you to write me the next chapter. Soon!

Hey good and creepy and sweet and I just can't wait for more.

Evil cliffie, why must you put in an evil cliffie. Tortureous.

More SOON PLEASE!