|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Search for the Soul|
| Kiraling chapter 14 . 5/24/2013
Yay for Severus! :)
| Kiraling chapter 13 . 5/24/2013
Well, I guess it's cruel of me to say this, but... yay for Ginny dying! ;] I'm sorry, but I really can't stand her, neither in books nor in fiction. I'm glad we got a glimpse of Draco, however; slimy bastard though he is, I really like him :P
| Kiraling chapter 11 . 5/24/2013
Nice story so far. I especially love the humorous bits, mainly by Kingsley and Moody ;) Hoping to see more of Lucius and Severus!
| sleepingal0ne chapter 29 . 8/31/2011
The ending is so twisted and unexpected. I cried a lot! Brilliant story. But why do that to Harry? :(
| KritianLOVE chapter 29 . 11/1/2009
Hey i really liked this story. It made me cry and thats hard to do.
| TheEveningStar chapter 29 . 11/20/2008
Wow. That ending really made me cry. Why'd you have to do that to poor Harry? It was still a great story, I just don't generally like sad endings.
| dapperyklutz chapter 29 . 7/20/2008
wtf... what an ending... i cried...
| dapperyklutz chapter 20 . 7/20/2008
ouch... Remus/Harry part is really painful and tearful... great chappie..
| dapperyklutz chapter 5 . 7/19/2008
HAHAHAHA:)) ROLFMAO! i loved the last part...!
| ugh chapter 4 . 2/6/2008
i think this is the stupidest story i have ever seen and s for the vault tht was beyond stupid.
| munchnzoey chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
| thoaks91 chapter 29 . 7/3/2007
wow this was an amazing story!
youre a really good writer. all characters are very much like they are in the books! well done.
and the storyline and the ending ware fine as well.
| Danielle chapter 29 . 6/27/2007
Brilliant story! The ending left me with chills, it was sad but excellent!
| t chapter 29 . 6/22/2007
love ur story but i must say that i don't like the ending very well maybe u could find a way to change it plz i would like it very much.
| Tarm chapter 3 . 6/12/2007
I know this is nitpicking, but sometimes your grammar sucks. For emample, one of your actual sentences;
“Oh, that’s good then,” Harry said, more to himself than to anyone else in actuality and set off upstairs to unpack.
What purpose do the words "in actuality" serve in the sentence I cited? The answer is nothing, other than writing in a 'passive voice' which does little to advance the story. If you do not know the difference, note I could have begun this paragraph in the passive voice by asking, 'What purpose does the addition of the words...'
Also, avoid using the word 'that'. A rewrite of your first paragraph, for example, remains coherent without your three uses of the word 'that';
“Say that again, Mr Weasley.” Minerva did not appear to be pleased by the sudden news none  of the three teenagers stood [sic - correct verb tense is 'standing'] in her office would be returning to school the next year. Harry would have gone as far as to say  she was furious. He knew  she was likely to try and appeal to the intellectual in Hermione at the very least – after all, her OWL scores had been the highest in the year, even beating all the Ravenclaws!