Kyyah~~Monster fanfic~! And awesomely excellent Monster fanfic at that!

Lovely writing, and a very interesting take on things. I suppose, they're both so starved for love...

Very sweet.

Ha! I read this story out loud to my sister as we were trying to recover from the sadness that is RENT, and we both agree that it is a very lovely story. You write beautifully and it made us happy. Thank you. Have you seen the ending of the series yet? You should. It's amazing. I

A very believable look into two complicated yet similar characters. I can't believe there isn't more Monster fanfic out there!

I think you have a definite grasp on the characterization, even if the actions dictated may be somewhat unorthodox. I think the relationship between Tenma and Grimmer was kind of unorthodox, yet I bought it. In actuality, as I was watching this series, I kept thinking Tenma and Anna were going to be thrust together, or at least riddled with sexual tension. And that doesn't seem to be the case.

Well done.