Reviews for Forbidden Fruit
Guest chapter 21 . 7/2
thank you for the amazing story!
itscheriee1 chapter 21 . 5/18
You are brilliant. I'm glad I came across this story. Can't wait to read Paradise Lost ahhhhhh
mamahd chapter 8 . 5/14
Gaaahhh I want to strangle who ever interuppted that moment! Excellent writing, fantastic plot Bravo!
mrs.haloona chapter 1 . 4/28
I absolutely adore this story and I do not understand the negative comments at all. It is far from a negative outcome as you have clearly stated there is a sequel. As someone who has read this story multiple times I just want to tell you that I really really hope that you find the inspiration to finish this series. I sometimes find myself coming up with endings for paradise lost. You are an amazing writer, thAnk you for sharing your vision with us.
Guest chapter 21 . 3/24
Horrendous outcome. Not much here to enjoy about this story any more. Seems kind of bleak. I'm not one to wallow in angst, as I find it depressing. If sequel doesn't take a sharp turn, I don't see much point in reading it. Thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/17
Just too much hopping back and forth in time. The story feels halted and doesn't flow. Just when it gets good, you decide to do a time jump.
xxxlenaleexxx chapter 21 . 1/19
*abject moaning/WEEPING*
This peice of priceless storytelling is one of the absolute most bestest Snermione fics ever written ever. I . .FEELS! The hair pulling, the face scratching, the nail biting, the unrestrained screams of ! This is what your story has done to me. It's ruined me in the most delightful way.
You deserved a damn review for every glorious chapter and I'm truly sorry I neglected that. Rest assured this will be remedied for part II. I can even think straight I'm so excited. Severus is written soooo well. Actually they both are but he's what I come here for. I love your rendition of him. It's utterly perfect. And your plot! You surprise the hell out me from time to time and I love/dread it. Like when Severus screwed up for the first time and the Dark Lord saw the bond. I just knew he'd be able to hide it but nope. Plain as day Voldemort saw it and I was just in HORROR! And then when Severus gave in and was like to hell with it. We're doing this. Sooo pleasantly surprised! I just knew he'd lament and labor to find another solution for as long as he could but no. Or I suppose perhaps that it really was as long as he could! Their effort was BEYOND valiant. The sheer control this man has displayed makes you want to believe his will is nigh unbreakable. But then you go and show us that it is, in fact, very much so and it makes me love him MORE and yes! yes! I'm on cloud nine. Thank you SO MUCH for sharing this with us! Truly!
Mizu chapter 2 . 1/9
Completely captivated.
mrs.haloona chapter 6 . 12/2/2016
I love this chapter how the magic is starting to manifest for others to see
you have an amazing gift for story telling
Guest chapter 21 . 11/3/2016
Nice build, I loved reading it
vickety chapter 21 . 10/24/2016
I have enjoyed this. Thanks.
uwishuwerecool chapter 20 . 8/19/2016
love story
sevslave1 chapter 21 . 3/30/2016
This tale was absolutely brilliant! I can't wait to start on part two.
Random reader chapter 21 . 3/2/2016
This was a great read and I really love how brilliant you are at building anticipation and sexual tension. Their longing for each other is intense. But boy, when pregnancy is used to create conflict and drama I absolutely start to hate the stories that use it. I don't quite know why. Perhaps because when it happens it always seems to be written in stone. There's usually no considering of getting rid of the pregnancy and it immediately foretells the happy ever after ending in my mind (Snape eventually comes around and is delighted to raise a family. They have many more children and live in marital bliss.). It's just so common with these fanfics and I think I'm bored with that kind of ending. Just my two cents and I'm certainly not trying to bring you down. Maybe I'm jumping the gun a bit and I will definitely read the sequel cause I'm hooked.
sasa chapter 14 . 12/21/2015
Merlin help me! The feels! My heart clenched at the last words. I soo can't get over it!
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