| Reviews for Forbidden Fruit |
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   Alyndriel chapter 13 . 2/6 I really REALLY REALLY love the plot of your story. Your writing is lovely and the premise is creative. That being said, jumping around in time makes it unnecessarily complicated for my brain to follow and I would love to read a linear version so that I could concentrate more on the beautiful intricacies of the plot rather than spending mental energy situating bits of various chapters in a timeline. Please don’t get me wrongdefinitely not going to stop reading and very much loving the story itself and I get that you likely have artistic reasons for framing it the way you have. It’s a personal preferance thing. Thank you for writing and sharing! |
| Diarrhoea Verborum chapter 21 . 6/15/2023 Usually, stories about soulmates/bond is not my cup of tea, but your fic is amazing! Thank you! |
| Shukushaka chapter 21 . 11/17/2022 Wow I must say, the slow burn at the beginning was really excruciating. Didn't realize it was angst till halfway through the story. Also the raw emotion was exhilarating. The way my heartbeat raced when they actually did it..just mindboggling. The way you wrote this story..damn,I wonder why it's not on the top list. Great work muggle |
| Snapefan1983 chapter 9 . 9/7/2022 This story is confusing It was July 1996 Professor McGonagall called hermione and Severus in that room so how come it was August, 1996 By the time Professor McGonagall poked her head in the door, all looked as they knew she expected it to. |
| Snapefan1983 chapter 6 . 9/7/2022 But if Severus and hermione have the Order of the Ang'guin Weyr.’ And Harry is being held by Order of the Ang'guin Weyr.’ then that means hermione and Severus can free Harry? |
| Snapefan1983 chapter 5 . 9/7/2022 I’m confused about the time line ! This back and forth is confusing |
| Snapefan1983 chapter 4 . 9/6/2022 Was that why he could heal her when she fell off the ladder? He didn’t use a normal spell he used their bond but the bond didn’t exist until after that ? |
| Snapefan1983 chapter 3 . 9/6/2022 Are they soul mates it that why it happened without them knowing and without them doing anything to make it happen? |
| Snapefan1983 chapter 1 . 9/6/2022 Never move an injured person as it can cause worse paralysis if they have broken their back or neck! |
| dmoni chapter 1 . 10/26/2021 love it! |
| Guest chapter 21 . 10/20/2021 Terrific story and very imaginative! Looking forward to reading the sequel. Off I go... |
| alannalove1990 chapter 21 . 9/3/2021 So maybe this isn’t abandoned ! Yay! |
| alannalove1990 chapter 20 . 9/3/2021 Soooo good and also sooo sad this is abandoned |
| alannalove1990 chapter 19 . 9/3/2021 Good save Severus! |
| alannalove1990 chapter 18 . 9/3/2021 So Much Angstytttttt |