|Reviews for Forbidden Fruit|
| xxxlenaleexxx chapter 21 . 1/19
This peice of priceless storytelling is one of the absolute most bestest Snermione fics ever written ever. I . .FEELS! The hair pulling, the face scratching, the nail biting, the unrestrained screams of ! This is what your story has done to me. It's ruined me in the most delightful way.
You deserved a damn review for every glorious chapter and I'm truly sorry I neglected that. Rest assured this will be remedied for part II. I can even think straight I'm so excited. Severus is written soooo well. Actually they both are but he's what I come here for. I love your rendition of him. It's utterly perfect. And your plot! You surprise the hell out me from time to time and I love/dread it. Like when Severus screwed up for the first time and the Dark Lord saw the bond. I just knew he'd be able to hide it but nope. Plain as day Voldemort saw it and I was just in HORROR! And then when Severus gave in and was like to hell with it. We're doing this. Sooo pleasantly surprised! I just knew he'd lament and labor to find another solution for as long as he could but no. Or I suppose perhaps that it really was as long as he could! Their effort was BEYOND valiant. The sheer control this man has displayed makes you want to believe his will is nigh unbreakable. But then you go and show us that it is, in fact, very much so and it makes me love him MORE and yes! yes! I'm on cloud nine. Thank you SO MUCH for sharing this with us! Truly!
| Mizu chapter 2 . 1/9
| haloona.malfoy chapter 6 . 12/2/2016
I love this chapter how the magic is starting to manifest for others to see
you have an amazing gift for story telling
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/3/2016
Nice build, I loved reading it
| vickety chapter 21 . 10/24/2016
I have enjoyed this. Thanks.
| uwishuwerecool chapter 20 . 8/19/2016
| sevslave1 chapter 21 . 3/30/2016
This tale was absolutely brilliant! I can't wait to start on part two.
| Random reader chapter 21 . 3/2/2016
This was a great read and I really love how brilliant you are at building anticipation and sexual tension. Their longing for each other is intense. But boy, when pregnancy is used to create conflict and drama I absolutely start to hate the stories that use it. I don't quite know why. Perhaps because when it happens it always seems to be written in stone. There's usually no considering of getting rid of the pregnancy and it immediately foretells the happy ever after ending in my mind (Snape eventually comes around and is delighted to raise a family. They have many more children and live in marital bliss.). It's just so common with these fanfics and I think I'm bored with that kind of ending. Just my two cents and I'm certainly not trying to bring you down. Maybe I'm jumping the gun a bit and I will definitely read the sequel cause I'm hooked.
| sasa chapter 14 . 12/21/2015
Merlin help me! The feels! My heart clenched at the last words. I soo can't get over it!
| Jessie Deal chapter 21 . 11/2/2015
This is an amazing story. The description of Snapes and Hermiones psyche was excellent. I really liked their torment and andguish and how it reflected on their behaviour. Very well done. On to read "Paradise Lost" now.
| zaubernuss chapter 7 . 10/5/2015
I really like this story. It's well written and takes an interesting approach to Hermione's and Severus's relationship. The only thing that really confuses me is the time jumping. I think the story would have been much easier to read told chronologically. At times, I find it hard to remember which event has happened when, and I also regret that I know what is coming (for instance at this point, I know that their relationship will not move on for some time). Probably, you have done it to span the time frame and bring in element of the original story without having to give all the details?
| Perry Downing chapter 21 . 9/25/2015
I was so bereft when this was the end. I do hope you'll finish Paradise Lost. But if not, thank you for one of the best stories I've ever read!
| Perry Downing chapter 20 . 9/25/2015
The picnic scene was lovely. And sad.
| Perry Downing chapter 19 . 9/25/2015
So often the tension leaves a story once they've consummated their relationship. Excellent job of maintaining the taught atmosphere.
| Perry Downing chapter 18 . 9/25/2015
Oh Snape . . . You idiot. His myopic nobility can be infuriating. Marvelous chapter as ever.