Reviews for Forbidden Fruit
Shukushaka chapter 21 . 11/17
Wow
I must say, the slow burn at the beginning was really excruciating. Didn't realize it was angst till halfway through the story.
Also the raw emotion was exhilarating. The way my heartbeat raced when they actually did it..just mindboggling. The way you wrote this story..damn,I wonder why it's not on the top list.
Great work muggle
Snapefan1983 chapter 9 . 9/7
This story is confusing It was July 1996 Professor McGonagall called hermione and Severus in that room so how come it was August, 1996 By the time Professor McGonagall poked her head in the door, all looked as they knew she expected it to.
Snapefan1983 chapter 6 . 9/7
But if Severus and hermione have the Order of the Ang'guin Weyr.’ And Harry is being held by Order of the Ang'guin Weyr.’ then that means hermione and Severus can free Harry?
Snapefan1983 chapter 5 . 9/7
I’m confused about the time line ! This back and forth is confusing
Snapefan1983 chapter 4 . 9/6
Was that why he could heal her when she fell off the ladder? He didn’t use a normal spell he used their bond but the bond didn’t exist until after that ?
Snapefan1983 chapter 3 . 9/6
Are they soul mates it that why it happened without them knowing and without them doing anything to make it happen?
Snapefan1983 chapter 1 . 9/6
Never move an injured person as it can cause worse paralysis if they have broken their back or neck!
dmoni chapter 1 . 10/26/2021
love it!
Guest chapter 21 . 10/20/2021
Terrific story and very imaginative! Looking forward to reading the sequel. Off I go...
alannalove1990 chapter 21 . 9/3/2021
So maybe this isn’t abandoned ! Yay!
alannalove1990 chapter 20 . 9/3/2021
Soooo good and also sooo sad this is abandoned
alannalove1990 chapter 19 . 9/3/2021
Good save Severus!
alannalove1990 chapter 18 . 9/3/2021
So
Much
Angstytttttt
alannalove1990 chapter 17 . 9/3/2021
About time!
alannalove1990 chapter 16 . 9/3/2021
Yesssss
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