Reviews for Outside Looking in
Spidey-phd chapter 9 . 8/29
My favorite chapter
Chardinal chapter 15 . 8/29
I really enjoyed this. Cade is great, really interesting character.
VoiceoftheWolf135 chapter 15 . 7/20
I thought this was gonna be some random funny oneshots with a councilor but it turned into one of the most interesting stories I've read for Danny Phantom. I really liked how you explained Cade's thoughts and conclusions without some random "They have the same name!" epiphany or accidental morph viewing. This is one of the few stories with an OC main character that I actually liked! I'll be checking out your other stories since you hooked me onto this one
bluefeather22 chapter 1 . 7/18
I really liked your story. the people were in character and the plot was very realistic. I love revalation fics but they are often done to dramatic (at least in my opinin). This was amazing your writing is really good. thank you for sharing :)
Serulium chapter 15 . 7/8
That was great! Shame it had to end though. I really enjoyed the profiling and all the little hints that Cade put together and eventually figured out. And the way he eventually told Danny that he knew was brilliant. Thank you for this story. I enjoyed it very much!
Serulium chapter 6 . 7/7
Ooooohh! Burned! That ending of decimate was priceless, and your use of subtlety it's just impressive. I love the mental war between Vlad and Cade was fantastic. Ask the little finches and reading each other blew me away! By the way, I really enjoyed the last interlude very much. Your disruption of coffee and the conversation was hilarious. Thank you.
Brenden chapter 15 . 6/23
Shoetsu Otaku chapter 15 . 6/11
Hahaha, what a way to end it. I like it, though it would have been interesting to see how Cade helped Danny talk/tell his parents. Keep up your great writings!
RayvnAshes2 chapter 15 . 4/30
Awesome. I'm not usually a fan of OCs, but I quite like Cade. The one person in all of Amity Park who isn't directly involved that isn't an oblivious idiot.
Ambiguous Cake chapter 15 . 4/27
After reading quite a few of your stories now, I decided I should probably comment on one. Cade is a really fun character to read. I picture him as like apollo justice from the ace attorney series, i dont know why, but that's what he feels like to me. the psychological analysis and in depth characterization of... everyone was just awesome to read. 'cause everyone has a story to tell, even if they're the high school bully. so I like that you went into that with everyone. I keep back tracking in your stories to find where you first mention Cade, but so far I don't think I've found it yet. I'll keep looking.
yuki chapter 15 . 4/9
Oh God, this is the best psychology fic I have read. I have a request. Can you make fic like this but in Beelzebub world? Or Bleach? Because it's kinda awesome when I imagine it to be.
Guest chapter 15 . 3/25
I love this fic! Great job developing Cade's character, and you write the psychology really well.
Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 15 . 2/24
Eaugh. The ending. I don't know. Maybe I was totally over-hyping it, but I feel like it was a little downplayed - though, I do suppose it reflects Cade's personality in this sense, he's not one to blow things out of proportion. Nonetheless, I think it was mostly Danny Shadow that threw me off. I'm pretty sure he's not a canon character and I think the DID (which is the new term for MPD) episode was when he was split by the Fenton Ghost Catcher and instead of two, he ended up being three? That's the only answer I have. I'm not entirely happy about it, but this series was written well enough for that to be mostly overlooked. Probably. I think that if Shadow's presence had been brought up in chapters before this one and the previous one, I'd like it a lot more. There's kind of a deus ex machina sort of feel to it, which kind of irks me, especially with how abruptly the fic ends. Still, I really enjoyed this as a whole. The writing style, the characters, the plot, all of it fantastic.
Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 14 . 2/24
...uhm what? I know you briefly brought up "Danny Shadow" but who- wha-? I'm confused and that detracts from the overall strength of the story. What's going on? I liked everything up until the mention of I'm going to read the next chapter in hopes that it will shed some light on this...
Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 13 . 2/24
He's so close. I love him, he's great. The plot's been progressing nicely and I love the ally that Cade has found in Danny and that Danny has found in Cade. I hate Vlad and I cannot wait until Cade figures everything out. You've really developed his character. He's no just a flimsy OC that's been inserted to introduce perspective, but he's actually got a personality. He's got defining habits and emotional reflexes. His thoughts can be followed quite easily. Which is great for the reader who is following Cade on his mystery solving. He's very close and I love that he's so intelligent yet down to earth and genuine. Nothing like Vlad. Moving on to the next chapter!
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